Open Poetry #29 |
Effort of My Between |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Effort of My Between Eyes followed the bright lights on high from destinations unknown, the crisp air clearing thoughts that constantly shadow my own, dulling an ache that cannot be relieved for now. Have I told you how even the slightest gesture plays on my tomorrows and even though alone, I haven't given up in finding that corner of the world in which I fit. How thankful that I am, that I can still reach for the stars, although the eyes of the past read like fences, making boundaries for me to slip through or climb over. These legs are caught between compromise, weakened by dedication and fatigue of pedaling faster to that secret place where all thoughts search for tranquility, a serenity of afterglow, where peace is the softness of fingertip against cheek, lips to lips, eyes taking in eyes in a world of Between... No night or day, just experiences that poet me with tattoos unseen, breaking out once in awhile in a dance of need. Need that tucks that Genie away, making reality set in, guiding me to truth, pushing me to an end, etching me in a hold that illusion cannot touch. I see her as my reason, the pleasure of my talent, the effort of my between, spinning me into todays to keep from the dark side of tomorrow. I regret nothing, as I sell myself in sisterhood and garner the return knowing sticks and stones could break our bones but together, names can never hurt us. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
This was an stounding revelry of a very positive force trumpeting...filled with something we can all benifit from. Wonderful write. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well written |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WynterGal~ How thankful that I am, that I can still reach for the stars, although the eyes of the past read like fences, making boundaries for me to slip through or climb over.' Such unique imagery that is sooooo you~ I just love the all of it~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you never cease to touch me softly |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Have I told you how even the slightest gesture plays on my tomorrows and even though alone, I haven't given up in finding that corner of the world in which I fit. Yes, your words linger with the softest touch, Maureen~ |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
And so there is still hope in the world and you have made it come alive Pepper |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"I regret nothing, as I sell myself in sisterhood and garner the return knowing sticks and stones could break our bones but together, names can never hurt us." (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are destined to find that special corner of your heart where serenity asks in glory and you will garner more than that return, sweet friend, rewards come to the patient ones, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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