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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio

0 posted 2003-11-10 05:17 AM



Entangled

His snare is out there to all that do not believe.
He is ready to capture your soul
and
surround you in unbreakable chains of self-doubt.
You fight to be free unable
to move, unable to see.
Tears of anguish, tears of despair.
Oh!
How can you rid yourself of this
heartbreak and misery?
Hidden ina cloak of beauty,
do not be deceived.
For when you take his hand
you’re running down a path
of
eternal destruction.
Stop!
Mankind!
Stop before it is to late.

Love Bon-Bon


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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-11-10 06:26 AM


This is fantastic Bon, and opens a wide door for us to walk through, Americans must open their eyes to what is going on around us.  When your married, well frankly you only have contacts with other married couples and perhaps a few single friends....but oh Lord, when your single and looking for a companion to share life with, it is a rude awakening for certain....what has happened to morals, respect, concern for the hearts of others?

Truly Bonnie, you see much more then most...and I'm always greatful to read you...Good one.  
Love ya sis....Lee J.  Hey did you hear about JC and Jullian, pop over and read his last post and his message to me.  Wonderfully fantastic news!  

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