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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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sing, my man, sing sing those songs for broken hearts sing the sad blues let me bleed some more after all, like water is for flowing and air is for breathing broken pieces of the heart are meant to be scattered like dust sprinkled over barren lands deserted yes, like a friend writes butterflies are meant to be free free to hop from one flower to another for worthwhile is a life spent searching sweet happiness from one source to another and life is short meant to be enjoyed so should I be happy that I am a flower that was once visited for a once-upon-a-short-time and focus my lens on the brightest iris of memory’s eye? . . . sing my man sing don’t stop now sing the blues let me bleed till there’s no more bleeding to do maybe then the healing will begin till then the kaleidoscope must turn reflecting multiple designs of blue |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
so should I be happy that I am a flower that was once visited for a once-upon-a-short-time and focus my lens on the brightest iris of memory’s eye? ABSOLUTELY you should! hiya and good morning, very much enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
dearest Sud? Ya make me mothy heart smile.  (Thank you)  Words break into splinters on the pages I write |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Well you got the opinion of two of the best. I can only add.  |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
do lyrically beautiful |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
i need some hendrix, muddy waters and a shot of willie dixon after this.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ So good ... so good~ You grow with each new read~ Nice to see you dear friend~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh my, Sudhir! This is excellently deep and passionate! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Sudhir, this is wonderful, sweet friend, this truly held the Eric Clapton and Jimi Hendrix spirit and would make a wonderful blues anthem, yay! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"let me bleed till there’s no more bleeding to do" nuff said, sudhir! and a little happy hug for you too... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
so so good, and just so complete |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
oh.................. sing, my man, sing sing those songs for broken hearts sing the sad blues let me bleed some more after all, like water is for flowing and air is for breathing broken pieces of the heart are meant to be scattered like dust sprinkled over barren lands deserted gooooood write! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you all... so very much... so very much... Regards Sudhir |
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