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but tonight |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox 
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you haven't talked to me in pretty tones in such a long long time but tonight you speak softly as if you remember what we had as if the words i sent you touched you i didn't know that could happen again i thought you were untouchable you haven't given me a hug in such a long long time but tonight you're arms surround mine as if you remember that song as if the song we sang two years ago reached you i didn't know that could happen again i thought you were unreachable you haven't handed your heart to me in such a long long time but tonight you guard it safely with my palms as if you remember the feeling as if the dreams we had of forever danced for you i didn't know that could happen again i thought we had forgotten what forever tasted like joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
geez, do I know this too well...and I keep thinking "and what about tomorrow?" |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Very well done! Cherish this moment of beautiful discovery. Excellent! I very much enjoyed this poem. Patricia |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
wonderful! "if you won't let me fall for you |
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