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Magic Solias
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0 posted 2003-11-08 05:20 PM


SOME CALL IT LOVE


It took him then and there
he could only watch
being overwhelmed by this
strange feeling in his chest
of longing, of wanting
and the distance between
his unknown intent and that what
he was wanting
arose this strange feeling
in his chest
some call love
others just desire
for him it was
much more mysterious
more like a breezy
rainy day in some
melancholic twilight city
with clouds chasing another
and some sweet piano melodies
seducing the air with their sad
vibrations

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Margherita
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1 posted 2003-11-08 05:23 PM


Very beautiful! And welcome!
Love, Margherita

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2 posted 2003-11-08 06:56 PM


MagicSolias~
Yeah ... I've known that feeling~
Beautifully expressed~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Jes
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3 posted 2003-11-08 07:02 PM


Yes ---- Love

Smile i like that

Jes


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4 posted 2003-11-08 07:09 PM


Enjoyed...James
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5 posted 2003-11-09 01:27 AM


I hear the piano in the silence of this write...very nice
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6 posted 2003-11-09 03:12 PM




(big hugggssssssss) I have felt these promonitions myself and it can be so hard to deal with! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, let's hope that it truly is love, keep the faith, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magic, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Patricia
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7 posted 2003-11-09 03:17 PM


Beautiful!  Your words make me want to fall in love, and that is something I rarely consider.  (Smiles)  I was captivated by the images in the piece.  Well done!

Patricia

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8 posted 2003-11-10 10:20 AM


some call love
others just desire
for him it was
much more mysterious

I like this very much... You've taken a feeling that's really beyond words and expressed it well... Welcome! *S*

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