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j0n4th4n
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0 posted 2003-11-08 03:20 PM



the kisses she once
held in her mouth
would come out like
a fountain
the sparkle that hid
in her eye
once showed and flashed
for me
her hands once reached out to touch me
encircling? i remember one
time her hand was stroking
my face, eyes shut

now, all is gone. what
i hold now
is dried petals...memories...memories
memories of her eyebrows

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leighsa
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1 posted 2003-11-08 03:36 PM


OH......
:'( THis is so sad.. IT'S VERY hard to go through something like that... I hope everything else happens for the better...
YOurs always
  ashgiel....
read my latest post

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2 posted 2003-11-09 11:24 AM


Now you know, I enjoyed this very much.
I would be hard put to have a title on it,
as well.  So many thoughts come to mind
as to what those eyebrows had to say.

SharaRose
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3 posted 2003-11-09 12:29 PM


It is so true how looks, or tones of voice or body language can say so much. I do understand this.
Love,
Terri~

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4 posted 2003-11-09 12:49 PM


that's cool
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5 posted 2003-11-09 01:24 PM




(big hugggssssssss) My heart goes out to you, dearest friend, I truly believe love features memories of every simple feeling and gesture and you have revealed one part of it all with so much passion! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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6 posted 2003-11-09 09:30 PM


I like these images -- very original stuff here. I'm going to be looking for your work.

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j0n4th4n
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7 posted 2003-11-12 07:46 PM


thankyou, all of you, for your kind encouragement!
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