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This is How We Love
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This is How We Love |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is how we love. In distance...we dance in the greater space of our belonging. There are no drawn lines to show us where we part. Only the eyes may be deceived. The sightless dream intimate colors to the dark. Tell me we are far...and I will reach with closed eyes and breathe you near. This is how we love. In distance...we simply dance. Eric |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
May there never be any lines to detract from what is important. Well done, Sir. Very well done. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"The sightless dream intimate colors to the dark. Tell me we are far...and I will reach with closed eyes and breathe you near." my my my..... *SIGH* you are one of the very best romantic poets I have ever read.  |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
this is sweet... Ya know what they say. Curiosity salted the snail. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Tell me we are far...and I will reach with closed eyes and breathe you near. This is how we love. In distance...we simply dance. Eric, this is exactly the way my Love and I feel, until I start having my pity parties and get depressed. as |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ericc If you can do it that way, and make it feel so real...it must be beautiful, like this poem! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Eric...may you and your love dance happily through life! ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Life stirs in my heart when you breathe me near. On the screen of my mind your beauty manifests and I am aware of being, I am new, I am you. We sail through space on the currents of our breath of love. Higher and higher we dance, closer than ever to where we belong. Thank you dear Eric, your beauty inspires. I love you, Margherita |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eric~ This is simply breathtaking~ 'Tell me we are far...and I will reach with closed eyes and breathe you near.' Okay ... that's a *sigh* waiting for a place to happen ...~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn Eric ...that is simply beautiful |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
The way it should be, Eric. What wisdom of love you hold... Patricia |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Whooa.. "In distance...we simply dance." I loved that line!! Simply dance...yes, why must everything be so complex...just dance.. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
I found out the hard way love doesn't know boundries. Oceans divide, and still the heart can feel every joy, pain, compassion, empathathetic nudge as if they were right there standing in front of you. I understand this write. Love, Terri~  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such tender romance so gracefully to waltz this page. Lovely. TD |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Ericc, This is great poetry I loved it...Rita |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) That is such a beautiful way to make long-distance relationships last,s weet friend, saying we are far and working on a plan to close the canyons of the heart in! (big hugggssssssss) I love this, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
That is the way. Beautifully written, my friend! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wonderful..just wonderful. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Tell me we are far...and I will reach with closed eyes and breathe you near. This is how we love. In distance...we simply dance. Absolutely beautiful write. *S* |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
After a long pause, I say well done. You write beauty beautifully. |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
I only wish I could write like you. Well done and very romantic ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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