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Where the Earth Ends (To Wind)
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Where the Earth Ends (To Wind) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Where the earth ends and the sky begins is a fine line drawn etched in grey smog something spoke to me as a lone bird soar carbon in hand canvas before me hands shaking mimicking the rumble of the subway beneath me I tried, in earnest to purge this creeping molten weight boring a whole in my innards and with each breath every whisp of wind that subway shook and the carbon fell dropping to that fine line where the earth ends and the sky begins ----------------------------------------------- Thank you, Liz |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Wow, your voice sure triumphantly reigned here like the thunder of an oncoming train, sweet friend, when you see the ash sparkle in the light you can see so much more, yay, this is wonderful and Liz is truly an inspiration too, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
Sue .. you are writing so lyrically and beautiful these days it is like a damburst and it is wonderful to behold this is singing |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Something she and even I will appreciate  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous writing |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Suuue! thats 10 times better than I could've made it.. thank you so much for this What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
There is so much more when we open our eyes so much more...this was a lovely write. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Susielove, it looks like you've taken another giant step forward in this journey of discovery. VERY nicely done! (Actually, this may be your best) And Susie?  "In looking Northward, I see a light" |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
forgot to put in my library What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Noah, thank you . . . this is from one line Liz jotted down and I ran with it (she has a bunch of these) Bri . . oops thank you so much from you . . . this brings me smiles see?  xxoo Meg - very cool two birds with one stone thank you Thanks Dix Liz, no , thank you . . and I seriously doubt that . . . I just yanked from you but glad you liked it *smile* (there is another line I am dying to snag, too) Lee , yes so very true thank you Baby? really? That honors me that you think so *big smiles* Liz, thank you so much . . . for allowing me to use this line and so happy I stumbled upon it and you Thanks guys xxoo |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I'm taking the sleep line, and writing one for you What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful. To be able to grow into the sky ... out of those noisy boundaries ... that's the miracle. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Liz, I adored it! Please put it here just like you have it thank you so much and you have done better with that line *smile* Ohh Margherita . . thank you so very much Thanks guys xxoo |
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