Open Poetry #29 |
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Rendezvous |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
![]() Picture by Alan Ayers * * * As we climbed love's highest peak Our love brought us to our knees I trembled at your touch We were both so eager to please In the afterglow of love You leave me breathless for more Amongst the remnants of our pleasure We lay together on the floor My passion is still burning Like the embers in the fire I wait for love to quench me And satisfy my deep desire We feel so close to heaven As we two become one Making love throughout the night Until the rising of the sun In the morning you will leave me With a smile upon my face Until again we rendezvous Same time, same place * * * "Love......bittersweet, irrepressible, loosens the limbs and I tremble" I am in motion |
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allamericanjoe Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 116Iredell county, NC |
Nice! Erotic, yet romantic and very visual. You made me blush! Good write. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, and may your heart forever be a songbird singing in your beautiful garden in loves happiness forever! (kiss on cheek) This brought a smile to my heart, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sue~ Loverly ... loverly ... loverly~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely Sue hugs M |
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KristieSue![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
love it... Ya know what they say. Curiosity salted the snail. |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Very sensual and well written! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
big smile |
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