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Mystic Mystron
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0 posted 2003-11-07 10:42 PM



The white clouds sailed by,
Gracefully floating, rising
And racing across the sky.

The birds gather, flittering around.
Gathering and bursting like fireworks
Bursting across the sky.

Some animals begin their sleep
To rest and rejuvenate till next year
To wake refreshed and new

The snow then falls from the sky
Blanketing the world in white
Renewing the land with the cold snow

The sun soon returns to its warming heat
Melting the snow into little rivers
Washing away the old, to make way for the new

The cycle begins again
Life, death, rejuvenation
And a new season starts again

You are a good poet as soon as you try to reach others with your words.
You are a great poet when those same words touch your heart first.

© Copyright 2003 Wilfred Gardner - All Rights Reserved
wandering glider
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1 posted 2003-11-08 12:24 PM


Indeed, the seasons drive it all.
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2 posted 2003-11-08 12:54 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet Wilfred, and may each of these seasons offer you many blessings and joy to hold true to your heart forever! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Wilfred, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Sadelite
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3 posted 2003-11-08 01:26 AM


Cycles--they're pretty amazing aren't they?
Enjoyed your write.
                              Sadelite

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4 posted 2003-11-08 04:03 AM


the title caught me, and the rest kept me
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