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silenttruth New Member
since 2003-11-07
Posts 3 |
stuck you're stuck and can't find a way out looks like being a gangster isnt all its fit to be three years today you joined now you wanted out but they said no you ruenied your life now two years lateryour still running lets face it your life is nothin but hiding we're running they're running faster we move they follow theres no quiting now we suffer cause of you never setteling down always on the run don't want death yet it feels like we're being hunted you made this chioce to live like this you can't sse how much i suffer if this is all your falut then why am i the one fleeing the pain? |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions. Quite a subject for a first post, and full of passion and power. We help each other here. I find your style very unique. If you run the spell check to catch the words spilled in the fury of art, the flow of your works will be smooth as glass. Well done. Look forward to more. ThisDiamond |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SilentTruth~ This is an emotive purge of thoughts~ Welcome to Passions~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, that's what friends are for, they must stand up for each other and work together and you depict this gratitude in this powerful debut, I love it! Welcome to Passions, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and be sure to check your E-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Mystic One Member
since 2003-09-14
Posts 134 |
Never run!! Stand firm on your beliefs!! Don't accept others advice!! Look at your problem and you will find the answers!! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You're a solid thinker and you have a good feel for the way a poem needs to move. You're going to be just fine here.... Me Want More! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The despair is apparent in this writing... you accomplished a purpose here. Please, enjoy your Welcome to Passion! and please know, we are looking forward to more! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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