Open Poetry #29 |
tear drop |
mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
It was on this day I noticed – another tear drop, rolling - down the face of turmoil. Simplicity in form, but, for a moment It’s function wasn’t the same. Creeping with the wilderment, like old door casings revealing – how long. With how many times/have we seen – and how many of those - characters have passed. As in, temperance and and a lost key. Holding onto the, benevolence – of which is, to be. For you see – The closer I condone the real lining of our, wants and needs. This tear - reflected ME. If nothing is something |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MysticPoe~ So many facets to the teardrop~ I have seen myself in the reflection too~ Wonderful penning~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Liked this |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey poe: this IS the best I have read from you (have I said that before) *smile* TRULY MY God yes . . . an inherent part . . . always Beautiful well thought heartfelt writing I adore this xxoo |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I like this one. :-) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
The closer I condone the real lining of our, wants and needs. This tear - reflected ME. Beautiful! |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
*sigh* this was beautiful Do songs on the radio sing to all the fools in love? |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Sorry for the delay---hope you all - get my much appreciated thanks!! *Marge, Thank you for the heart warming comments, as always. Thanks so much again. *KoKo, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for stopping by. It's good to hear from you. Thank you. *lw, your comments are as beautiful as your poetry. Thanks for taking the time to comment, AGAIN!! *froggy, good to hear from you again. Thanks for reading. Thank you. *LeeJ, Thanks for stopping by. Glad you liked it. Appreciate it! *Brad, good to hear from you again. Thanks for stopping by and taking in a read. Thanks again. *Kristie Sue, Thanks for taking the time to read. Glad you liked it. Thank you again. Thanks again to all of you for taking the time to comment. Thank you so much!! poe If nothing is something |
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