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mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

0 posted 2003-11-04 10:57 AM

It was on this day
I noticed – another tear drop,
rolling - down the face
of turmoil.
Simplicity in form,
but, for a moment
It’s function wasn’t the same.
Creeping with the
wilderment, like old door
casings revealing – how long.
With how many times/have we
seen – and how many of those -
characters have passed.
As in, temperance and
and a lost key.
Holding onto the,
benevolence – of which is,
to be.
For you see –
The closer I condone
the real lining of our,
wants and needs.
This tear - reflected
ME.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-11-04 11:30 AM

MysticPoe~
So many facets to the teardrop~
I have seen myself in the reflection too~
Wonderful penning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

2 posted 2003-11-04 11:37 AM

Liked this

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-11-05 08:02 PM

Hey poe:

this IS the best I have read from you
(have I said that before)
*smile*
TRULY
MY God yes . . .
an inherent part . . . always
Beautiful well thought
heartfelt
writing
I adore this
xxoo

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

4 posted 2003-11-05 08:56 PM

I like this one.

:-)

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2003-11-06 03:42 PM

The closer I condone
the real lining of our,
wants and needs.
This tear - reflected
ME.

Beautiful!

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

6 posted 2003-11-06 04:20 PM

well done

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

7 posted 2003-11-06 04:48 PM

*sigh* this was beautiful

Do songs on the radio sing to all the fools in love?

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

8 posted 2003-11-09 09:50 PM

Sorry for the delay---hope you all - get my much appreciated thanks!!

*Marge, Thank you for the heart warming comments, as always. Thanks so much again.

*KoKo, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for stopping by. It's good to hear from you. Thank you.

*lw, your comments are as beautiful as your poetry. Thanks for taking the time to comment, AGAIN!!

*froggy, good to hear from you again. Thanks for reading. Thank you.

*LeeJ, Thanks for stopping by. Glad you liked it. Appreciate it!

*Brad, good to hear from you again. Thanks for stopping by and taking in a read. Thanks again.

*Kristie Sue, Thanks for taking the time to read. Glad you liked it. Thank you again.

Thanks again to all of you for taking the time to comment. Thank you so much!!

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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