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0 posted 2003-11-07 12:38 PM



Oh for the fairest lips
to ever form words so sweet
ring as music to the deaf ear
to taste such lips
would make all men drunk
or remove all hope of sanity
reducing them
to sad poetic fools.
Such a fool am I
to have tasted
those messengers of grace
and forced now to be alone
left to my babbling
and remembering
oh for the fairest lips.

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1 posted 2003-11-07 12:40 PM


mmmmmm, I've had memories of lips like those
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2 posted 2003-11-07 12:41 PM


thank you
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3 posted 2003-11-07 01:23 PM


those messengers of grace
and forced now to be alone
left to my babbling
and remembering
oh for the fairest lips.
~~~~~

heck yeah, nothin' better than a good set o' lips that know how to kiss!

Do songs on the radio sing to all the fools in love?

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4 posted 2003-11-07 01:32 PM


Dan, this line made me laugh:

"left to my babbling"

Don't we all???

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

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5 posted 2003-11-07 02:07 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Dan, I haven't had my first kiss yet so I can't quite imagine the most powerful emotions of these kind of moments, but I know once a kiss is made, one could never let go as it can be absolutely painful! (sad sigh) This is a beautiful and heartfelt expression, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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6 posted 2003-11-07 02:20 PM


thank you
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