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Milky Daze
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Milky Daze |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The clouds move slowly overhead Entrancing in their milky gray oblivious In thoughtlessness seems well of mind instead My feet take air to tag along the billows frivolous And should it be that I am taken Out along the frill of something larger than my own Would I not with open arms explore new fabric to escape in? Vast the vapors woven into something I have never known As stitch by stitch I free my essence Of the clad set on at some beginnings trod To disappear into the spirit lavished incandescence Full of dreams in fluttered lids that bantor with the wetted sod Reaching up to touch their whispers Of the free form shapes I could Fair designs of new momentum Changes scene of all I would Copyright Kkh 11/03/03 |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
all those changing cloud shapes! enjoyed |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Reaching up to touch their whispers Of the free form shapes I could Fair designs of new momentum Changes scene of all I would Kathleen, this is like a beautiful picture on a canvas....so pretty.  Hugs  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beautiful write |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Reaching up to touch their whispers''' if only we could...wow this is beautiful... Lauren~ i carry your heart with me |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and so you should! Lovely write |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful write! Love, Margherita  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
floating.................... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very beautiful. Eric |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Makes me think of all of the clouds overhead....Looking at them and seeing animals, people, all sorts of things that our mind draws from those fluffy white pillows that gently drift by. Great write K. Hi U! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ "Vast the vapors woven into something I have never known" ~ "Reaching up to touch their whispers" Hi, TD! I enjoyed your poem very much. The above lines were especially remarkable.  EA |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...beautifully written.... ~K~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Would I not with open arms explore new fabric to escape in? Vast the vapors woven into something I have never known" such grace! There are many poets at Pip I admire for different reasons, but just for sheer beauty of yes, WOVEN word, you are among three I can count for an instant "zen" buzz--there's you, Magnus, and Liz Santos. (that's just off the top of head--there's MORE, I know) I admire the gentle fluid quality of your work, and you manage this without trite too.  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I too wish I could change the skies just like that, but nevertheless waiting seems to let the magic reel in animation! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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