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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-09-25 12:59 PM

she speaks in riddles
i in tongues, words adrift in
wind as fallen leaves

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (09-25-2003 01:03 AM).]

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2003-09-25 01:03 AM

Ah yes...I like this, Raph...very much.

Hugs to you, my friend...
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-09-25 01:05 AM

You're so good at these little short one's.. I wish I were holding that talent as well.

But I think I'll let you keep it, for now.

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

3 posted 2003-09-25 01:05 AM

They all speak in riddles Raph.

cool write.

Jason

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-09-25 01:09 AM

thanks and hugs vickie

Meg your talent surpasses mine

Jason. Amen grin

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2003-09-25 06:13 AM

Nothing like interpreting the wind's whispers ...
That's what I get.
Poeta dall'animo passionale e dalla mente acuta, ti mando un abbraccio.
Margherita

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-09-25 07:38 AM

Raph, now don't go tellin people
about the convos we used to have
(sorry couldnt help it)

Jason! not all of them do . . .

But Oh this is soo true
nice and tight Raph
(nice metaphors)
beautiful execution
*smile*
xxoo

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2003-09-25 08:19 AM

nicely done Raph.. these short forms seem to suit you well of late... the distilling of an idea or emotion into a few lines that the reader can enjoy..is not as easy as some might think...you seem to have a knack for doing it well..

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2003-09-25 08:42 AM

Aenimal
Good one, enjoyed.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2003-09-25 09:46 AM

enjoyed

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

10 posted 2003-09-25 10:04 AM

No communication breakdown here.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

11 posted 2003-09-25 10:58 AM

Ahem...hmm...scratching head...did anyone hear that? hehe Just kidding. WOW this is good for getting the point across that's for sure. I heard that in the quiet when there was no rustling of the leaves...

I know what you are talking about, and this is sad when 2 can't seem to communicate. Very sad indeed.
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

12 posted 2003-09-25 04:31 PM

what about a new one.... obsenities and draughts

she plays with skill
he cheats with no shame, verbal abuse adrift in draught(clever eh?)like kings and queens

so whos talking riddles to ya boi? whoever she is I commend her.

in all seriousness, loved the soft drift of teasing love/hate feelings i get from this.

if that made no sense...forget it....cos i'm tiredddddd

I just had fish and chips!

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

13 posted 2003-09-26 04:49 PM

Awesome as always

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

14 posted 2003-09-26 09:35 PM

Thanks Brad!

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

15 posted 2003-10-02 09:49 AM

Thank you for this one, Raph....I needed it this very morning.

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Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

16 posted 2003-10-03 09:01 PM

yeah Raph...and who would l#ve this more than me?

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

17 posted 2003-10-03 10:20 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Raphael, your words truly do speak with gales of heart, sweet friend, autumn is full of riddles and yet it seems so easy to concentrate and study them! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphael, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

18 posted 2003-10-03 10:22 PM

we can do that ya know.....LOL always....you are most enjoyable to read....

Lauren~

There's a song inside my soul
One that I've tried to write over and over again

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

19 posted 2003-10-04 02:25 AM

Awesome , when in love, we speak a language of our own!

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

20 posted 2003-10-04 03:58 AM

thanks everybody

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

21 posted 2003-10-04 10:50 AM

nice

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

22 posted 2003-10-07 08:54 PM

Beautiful Sir Raph.

Keeping this.

M

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

23 posted 2003-10-07 11:27 PM

those leaves again,
they are quite the catalyst arent they?
nice, short, and hittinghome

allamericanjoe
Member

since 2003-10-02

Posts 116
Iredell county, NC

24 posted 2003-10-07 11:32 PM

very insightful. I like mucho.

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

25 posted 2003-10-07 11:44 PM

So much said, in so little.I love to see your insights.

Crystal

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

26 posted 2005-06-25 06:18 AM

Sigh Bello, just...sighhh.

mxx

Oh, you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
My body aches to breathe your breath
Your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

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