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Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2003-11-07 09:06 AM

October breeze blows
Smells of fresh popcorn
Wafts into waiting noses
Feeding the local park pigeons
buttery kernels
While sitting on an old park bench
Momentary glance
Fixes eyes
entranced
smiles spring
Across our faces
As a strange wind blows
scaring birds far away

As they fly away
Either you or I moved
But in a blink
We were sitting together
Snuggling under my umbrella
Looking into each other's eyes
Wordless sighs
As red hearts
rain into our souls
time stands still.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2003-11-07 09:21 AM

Dan this is so sweet and romantic!!

And now I want buttery popcorn!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-11-07 09:24 AM

As red hearts
rain into our souls
time stands still.

Soft and lovely sparks from a very dear heart

Beautifully written Brad...have you ever tasted Kettle Corn....Awesome...a must try!

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-11-07 09:29 AM

thank you

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-11-07 11:36 AM

Brad~
This is just sooooo soft and pretty ... the imagery took me right to that park bench~
Good to read you my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-11-07 12:46 PM

one of us is always moving

it's nice when the time stands still though, those few rare moments

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

6 posted 2003-11-07 12:46 PM

thank you

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

7 posted 2003-11-07 01:20 PM

this is really sweet...can picture it.

Do songs on the radio sing to all the fools in love?

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-11-07 02:03 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautifully romantic, sweet friend, may rain forever pour down upon you in ecstasy and joy, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brad, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

9 posted 2003-11-07 02:22 PM

thank you

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