Open Poetry #29 |
Dreaming Sweet Dreams |
Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Lately I've dreamed of dying Waking and feeling like crying. At first what I thought was frightening, Has now become so enlightening. I've talked to my parents who have long passed, Wishing the dreams would forever last, I saw old friends from years ago, Met some folks that I didn't know. I didn't see Elvis, but heard that he's there, But saw Madam Chipmunk, and she hasn't a care! I met my two daughters, for the very first time, I'd lost them at childbirth, but they're doing fine. I've lost all fear of dying it seems Since having these wonderful heartwarming dreams. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Toe...Hugs! You didn't by any chance see Michelle? This really touched me! |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
you are a lucky man to have such peace about something many people fear. Most definitely sweet dreams. A lovely poem I don't even know how to properly respond to. I love reading your writing...always have, always will. Do songs on the radio sing to all the fools in love? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is wonderful Toe! After having a near death experience I too have no fear of death anymore. May all your dreams be peaceful ones poet sir. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
The key word is fight. I've never feared death, but I never give it an inch either. I fear letting it win, and what that would make of me. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I can't even begin to put into words what this makes me feel. *S* Just don't get too accepting, ya hear... for I swear I'll come haunt you. *S* This is beautiful, my friend... I know those visits meant the world to you. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Toe.. glad there is peace in the dreams. Somethings...well, hell.. don't be giving up and in.. we'd all hate that... |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I'm glad you have had such peace and happiness. Crystal |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This moved me beyond the tears, thank you my dear friend. An inspiring and comforting write. loveya lots, Linda |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Toe~ This is just too, too touching~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yep...this touches.... very very heart warming |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sweet dreams are good..James |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Don't get to liking those dreams too much, ragman. You still have plenty of hell to raise here before moving on...and I'll be here to goad you on. Aside from that, this is one heck of a poem you created here...these words hit home and the feelings laid out for everyone to see are sincere....one of your best |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Lyra...yeah (sigh) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, You gave me an ache in you know what. And I thought you couldn't teach old dogs new tricks. I never had any illusions about your ability to write, my friend. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Toe, This was outstanding!! I love my dreams... "if you won't let me fall for you |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, my friend...you did dream some sweet dreams. I always enjoy seeing you here, Toe. Hugs Ethel |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
It really is kind of cool, isn't it? |
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