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Written for you
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Written for you |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia 
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Tailored made To make you happy Just the right time When the tear Starts to fall Bringing a smile When the darkness Surrounds And you're all alone Words scattered on a page Infused with enough passion For everyone's interpretation And the world is a little brighter Knowing it was written Just for them Even though we know They were meant for you. As a little smile tiptoes Across your lips And you seem not to mind The darkness anymore As happy tears start to flow. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Dan, I am keeping this one and there is nothing you can do about it!!!! This is going on my desktop to cheer me up when I need it...  Thank you (I know it wasn't to me but heck, I can still pretend)."if you won't let me fall for you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 thank you! I know you wrote this for me, LOL, so it's going to stay in my personal library.you sweetie, you! |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
really cool |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Now I really know this one is for me...right?? Beautiful indeed! hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Well, attitude will get you everywhere!  good read Brad..thank you, I swear you look just like an ol friend of mine...Dennis...do you know you have a twin? |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you all. Susan you never know  |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
*smiling* yep this one reads personal to each and every one who reads...now that is a gift, to both the writer and the reader |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I was just thinking the same thing as Lee, you sure do look familiar to me also. Must be a Pennsylvania thing huh? lol. This is very well written and each reader is sure to think it is about "just them". Very well done. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
when your as old as me, everyone begins to look familar.....hehehehhehehe Denny is from New Jersey, boy could he write music! Just like you Brad.... |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
huh? did someone say PA? :-) We should have a PA/NJ/NY get-together :-) Do songs on the radio sing to all the fools in love? |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Hey, now I want to go!!! "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
hey what about GA? |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Ok, I have always wanted to go to N.O. so we can all meet there and crash Karen's place!!!! "if you won't let me fall for you |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
That sounds like a plan to me, a PA/NJ Get togeter would be right up there with Dairy Queen Blizzards!!! You name the place and time... Hey Brad, my son is a police officer in Atlanta!!! |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
cool. I'm in Augusta but Atlanta isn't too far |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Awesome Brad nice to see your words again |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hi Again, Brad, I'll be in GA over Thanksgiving...if you'd like to get together, perhaps we can arrange coffee somewhere, bring your wife/girl and lets chat over some java...think about it and let me know. I'd be pleased to meet you. |
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