Open Poetry #29 |
Special Angel |
midgetday3 Junior Member
since 2003-11-06
Posts 11Kentucky |
Special Angel I remember it quite clearly As if it were yesterday Cupid shot me with his arrow Then went on his merry way A special angel delivered So innocent and pure He left a handprint on my heart That soon became the cure Love burns bright in youthful eyes And life becomes a dream But with the changing tides of fate We meet a new extreme Christmas came and Christmas went Before I got the call A broken voice began to speak And said sorry, but it's Paul To the hospital we traveled And I began to pray A silent vigil by his side As hours turned to days The special angel's time had come To spread his wings and fly But even though he left this earth I refused to say goodbye A gentle breeze upon my cheek A kiss from the heavens above A heart full of memories To remind me of his love As time continues marching on I know I'm not alone For through the heavens, peering down I have a special angel of my own |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
So heart warming. Thank you. Eric |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How very special, a lovely tribute, a wonderful message. Welcome to Passions. Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS JACQUELINE!! Loved your entrance post. I look forward to more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Sad and beautiful. Welcome to Passions! "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
This was so beautiful and bittersweet. I am sending this to my mother. She suffered a similar loss quite a few years ago but has continued to feel Ed by her side ever since. What a wonderful trubute and fantastic first post. I am adding this to my private library for future reads too and do look forward to reading more of your work here. Sherry
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
This was so beautiful and bittersweet. I am sending this to my mother. She suffered a similar loss quite a few years ago but has continued to feel Ed by her side ever since. What a wonderful trubute and fantastic first post. I am adding this to my private library for future reads too and do look forward to reading more of your work here. Sherry
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Welcome to Passion's.I hope you enjoy it here.This was a tender write. Crystal |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jacqueline~ Welcome to Passions ... a tender, touching post~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Love burns bright in youthful eyes And life becomes a dream But with the changing tides of fate We meet a new extreme ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Welcome to Passions! And please continue with the beautiful writing! Do songs on the radio sing to all the fools in love? |
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midgetday3 Junior Member
since 2003-11-06
Posts 11Kentucky |
I just want to thank everyone for their warm reception into Passions. I look forward to reading all the great works that are posted on this site. Thanks again, Jackie |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Dear Jackie, I promised to email your poem to my mother..... this is what she wrote back. "It was 14 years ago yesterday that Ed passed away. Thank you for helping me to remember him - he was and still is my "angel". It still hurts like yesterday. Love Mom" Thank you for sharing your heart with us, you have deeply touched at least two lives today. Sherry
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, I love the smiles and joy gleaming through this joyous debut, sweet friend, I wish for this innocent love to croon to your heart forever, yay, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Jacqueline, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and be sure to check your E-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jacqueline, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Jacqueline, this is a wonderful first post, full of heart and love. I really look forward to reading much more of your work. And With hugs Ethel |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice |
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