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Aimster
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0 posted 2003-11-06 11:47 AM


Your words are whispered in my ear
I'm listening, but I choose not to hear
Instead I just keep on believing
And you just keep on decieving

I've danced to this tune before
Is it time to call it quits, time to shut the door?
Standing there with your eyes piercing through
Sometimes I love, then other times I hate you

This isn't a game, but my heart on the line
I feel we both are running...running out of time
No more tears are left to cry
The only question I have left is why?

Did you have it planned from the start?
How you'd manipulate me and break my heart
Or is there another explanation you'd like to share
Funny once all the cards are out, I find the table bare



"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

[This message has been edited by Aimster (11-06-2003 11:48 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-11-06 11:52 AM


Aimster
Well done enjoyed the read.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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2 posted 2003-11-06 11:56 AM


honest, and straightforward...what else could anyone want?
EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10
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3 posted 2003-11-06 12:23 PM


I love this. Love the flow of thought, love the depth of emotion put into it. Well done.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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