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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-11-04 05:04 PM

Won’t work
never does
no escape
onto film
not me
standing there
looking at you
caught in transparency
more like a fish
caught on lines
of words

Plainly, poetic memories
of photoed poet
seeing why
there’s no
reason to see
beyond words

for they are
not what you thought.

Might we see in the eyes
what lies
in the mind

"you didn’t capture my spirit
with this one
nor that one
this is no good
cast this aside..."

but my mind says,
wait,
look here,
in the old black and white
of the child
that I was
when I was young

when you were
slightly

older than I

here, you can spy
the look in my eye
of dreams in my soul
to be fulfilled some day
some way
some how
somewhere
in time

before you came about
before you were known
before you were shown

the poet in me

and now,
what was
your candid
camera query?

[Slightly revised repost, from 2000]

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2003-11-04 06:03 PM

the poet in me''

Indeed, you bring the poet out in us all....hugsss lady....
Lauren~

i carry your heart with me
i am never without it
you are what a moon has always meant sky of sky
the wonder that keeps stars apart-
e.e.cummings

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-11-04 06:38 PM

Wow! Now I have a pretty powerful take on this one dear lady.
Oooh my....that childhood spirit is still there you know?!
Dang Karilea...I know.
Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2003-11-04 06:43 PM

enjoy your words

Martie

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California

4 posted 2003-11-04 08:33 PM

Karilea...

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2003-11-05 02:59 PM

The poet in me....
what a wonderful poet you are! Hugs

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2003-11-05 03:07 PM

Excellent

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2003-11-05 03:14 PM

Oh yes! Have I ever lived these scenes! Thank you for saying it better than I ever could have done.

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______________Ratleader______________

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

8 posted 2003-11-06 09:47 AM

No one does it better.

Eric

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

9 posted 2003-11-06 11:45 AM

I love it! Makes me want to pull out the Nikon and begin snapping pictures. Bravo my friend. A must read for sure.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

10 posted 2003-11-06 12:18 PM

"here, you can spy
the look in my eye
of dreams in my soul
to be fulfilled some day
some way
some how
somewhere
in time"

I loved those lines...somewhere, somehow, someway...

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

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