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Remember The Sun
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Remember The Sun |
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Cold_Eternity Junior Member
since 2003-11-06
Posts 15Canda |
Remember The Sun Cold_Eternity The sun is gone, and gone for good, Ill miss it now, but soon forget; And when the time has finally come, Ill have no more reason left to run. We make our choices, and we live with them, We die with them, and we breathe them; And if for some reason you forget, Why we laughed, or cried in the days gone by, Then stand tall, look up, and remember the sun; How it used to make you smile, And warm you gently with fingers of light, Caress your body and kiss so sweet, And made you laugh, so gently when The wind would sometimes tickle your feet, But how soon that we forget, What friends we were when we needed a hand, And helped each other forward with loving words; It makes me sad that we forget when, And so quickly turn our backs on those who Tried, and those who failed, and those who never Stood a chance of making it but tried none the less, What place is it for us to choose, who is worthy Who shall win, and who shall loose, and so with this I say, While standing here in my darkened hours, I shall shed a single tear, and remember you, year after year The sun is gone and gone for good And where I will miss it and soon forget At least I tried to remember it. |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
What an ENTRANCE!!!!!  I loved it -------------------------------------------- It makes me sad that we forget when, And so quickly turn our backs on those who Tried, and those who failed, and those who never Stood a chance of making it but tried none the less ============================================ That is so true!!! Excellent start here....Looking forward to reading more of you in blue. Sherry  [This message has been edited by Magicmystery (11-06-2003 02:25 AM).] |
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Cold_Eternity Junior Member
since 2003-11-06
Posts 15Canda |
Thank you I will have to post more often, im not accustomed to receive feedback usually my work receives a number and is forgotten. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"What friends we were when we needed a hand, And helped each other forward with loving words; It makes me sad that we forget when," this really stood out for me.... I loved it  what a fantastic first post! Welcome |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
That's not what we are about here at Passions... we each enjoy each other's work.... we tend to read much more than we post our own.... You get to know people in here that way. And you get your work read (usually) more the more you read and comment on other members' poetry. Sherry |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
We make our choices, and we live with them, We die with them, and we breathe them; A very strong first post, full of wisdom. I enjoyed this and am looking forward to reading more. I hope you enjoy your time here. Take some time to read and get familiar with these pages of blue and I think you will enjoy this place as much as the rest of us do. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions. As was stated above, we're not about some numbers, but certainly about others. Respond to poets, post one or two poems a day here and there, we're most certainly about birthdates and anniversaries, we are a whole lot about enjoying a variety of good poems, day after day... so I guess you can say we're about some numbers, but certainly not about the kind you're used to. Sit back, relax, read, enjoy, and most certainly, Welcome to Passions!!! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
What a wonderful first post Welcome to Passions I hope you enjoy your stay... Greeneyes~ i carry your heart with me |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ColdEternity~ Welcome to Passions ... a unique circle of poets and friends on the Internet. Nice entrance ... hope to see more~ Some good advice in the above replies, read, comment, post new~ It works ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! Enjoyed your first post. I hope you enjoy your time with us here. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to pasions enjoyed |
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ranidae_poet Member
since 2003-11-05
Posts 66Texas,USA |
grand poem! I m new here as well...I m looking forward to reading more of your beautiful work. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"What place is it for us to choose, who is worthy Who shall win, and who shall loose" I loved that! Welcome to Passions! Susan "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Welcome to Passions Cold Eternity. A marvelous first post. Hope you enjoy the forum. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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