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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
Forever In the grand scheme of things Our time one Earth Is but only a blink of the eye or two And the time I have known you Is only a tick on the clock But during that tick I have amassed a lifetime of memories Memories I will cherish For another tick on the clock Which in our life is Forever "Everybody's lost |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wonderful....  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I often think about what's in the grand scheme of things. This is a beautiful write. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hey Amature2 this is a great piece. I made it my final read for the morning. Well done...made me think! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"And the time I have known you Is only a tick on the clock" So true...wonderful. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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