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exhale
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0 posted 2003-11-05 08:57 PM


like glass
so fragile
don't breathe
she might fall apart
like glass
so transparent
look closely
you might see right through her
like glass
blocking you out
keeping you away
like glass
don't breathe
she might fall apart


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1 posted 2003-11-05 09:00 PM


great write
Sadelite
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2 posted 2003-11-08 05:38 AM


I'm surprised this hasn't gotten more replies, exhale.  I feel sure people liked it.  They were probably busy like I was when I read it the first time.   (I stopped by earlier in the day during a quick break at work, but don't like to respond during work hours.)  I'm glad I ran across it again.  I like your analogies-they're as smooth as transparent window coverings--and here you thought I was going to say, "Glass!"  Have a
good day.
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3 posted 2003-11-08 12:59 PM




(big hugggssssssss) This is powerfully heartfelt, sweet friend, a heart of glass should never be toyed with and only should be handled by a compassionate master! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chelsea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

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