Open Poetry #29 |
Like Glass |
exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
like glass so fragile don't breathe she might fall apart like glass so transparent look closely you might see right through her like glass blocking you out keeping you away like glass don't breathe she might fall apart |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
great write |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I'm surprised this hasn't gotten more replies, exhale. I feel sure people liked it. They were probably busy like I was when I read it the first time. (I stopped by earlier in the day during a quick break at work, but don't like to respond during work hours.) I'm glad I ran across it again. I like your analogies-they're as smooth as transparent window coverings--and here you thought I was going to say, "Glass!" Have a good day. Sadelite |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) This is powerfully heartfelt, sweet friend, a heart of glass should never be toyed with and only should be handled by a compassionate master! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chelsea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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