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The Ache Of Sad And Lonely
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The Ache Of Sad And Lonely |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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When I read sad and lonely poems of those going through pain heartache of broken Pain and hurt of rejection of a love faded leaving empty space within deep inner beings of A void where completeness warmth once occupied hearts now aching now broken cold within When I read of this devastation hurt, pain many heart cries looking for release of I think of me and you.... Of how that even though we are sad and lonely when space is between We are so blessed to have love for each other A love of desire and need passion and warmth A love with fulfilment of completeness in which hearts blend into one keeping us ever close even in distance space that hurts so badly....... [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-05-2003 11:12 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl Let me be the first to say Lovely.  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you Seymour.  I appreciate you. Hugs  Ethel |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I like the way you did this one. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Mmm sadness twined with a bit of thankfulness. I like this garysgirl. Well done. A must read for everyone for sure! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I have been lonely But not really alone Knowing that love Was as close as a phone Knowing that the one I hold so dear Was missing me, too Wishing he was here I've also been lonely On my half of the bed Still sharing address But togetherness dead And I've been alone Thinking this would be Story of my life With no one for me Love is the key What difference it makes In how bearable are Our hurtings and aches There's still pain to suffer When separation's to bear We yearn, but find comfort Knowing this pain is shared. I like this very much... even in your happiness, you know the pain of being apart... and it gives you even more empathy for all those who are hurting. *S* |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
your words and Suthern's both..very touching M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Ethel, you know that's all I write is sad and lonely...and somehow it's what I like from a poem, sadly. I love this write of yours...it's beautiful |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
you have such a heart of gold...lovely Ya know what they say. Curiosity salted the snail. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Ethel, though it made me cry too because I don't have a hand to hold yet and have never got to talk to any sweet girl, it also made me smile because of your golden and compassionate heart that reaches out to all! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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rambling_words Junior Member
since 2003-10-29
Posts 44London, Ontario, Canada |
This is a special piece, with lots of wisdom inside its walls. John |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ethel: My God . . . YES We are so blessed to have love for each other I am grateful xxoo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Nan Kevin suthern Maureen Dixie Kristie Sue Noah John Vandana Sue I can't express to you all how very much I appreciate ya'll for your support and encouragement. I thank you all so much. With love and hugs, Ethel |
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