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cricket
New Member

since 2003-11-04

Posts 3

0 posted 2003-11-05 12:08 PM

i'm not sure if i like the title for this but......

Within me I see your presence
Like a beacon shining in the night.
So much in our lives in existence
Become one of our hearts delights.

For me one thing of importance
Was the friendship I shared with you.
A relationship of genuine caring
Between 2 hearts where love did ensue.

Yet,
Somehow the hurt came upon us
And we went our separate ways
The distance growing more stronger
As the hours turns into days.

There isn't always an explanation
For the way things happen in life
There won't always be an answer
To all your pain and strife.

Sometimes you stand at a crossroads
And there doesn't seem to be an end
Like the one that I'm facing this moment
That caused me to lose my friend.

Right now my thoughts are quite simple
As I journey on down this street
I try not to show you my heartache
But without you,
I feel incomplete.
This was written about a friend......someone that I love so very dearly.....but unfortunately due to carelessness I've lost the relationship.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-11-05 12:15 PM

I like the title, and the poem, my goodness, really touches me. I hope you and your friend can find a way to be friends again.

and welcome to Pip!!

allamericanjoe
Member

since 2003-10-02

Posts 116
Iredell county, NC

2 posted 2003-11-05 12:20 PM

Nice opening post! Very much enjoyed the read because I can relate to what you are talking about. Hope to see more of your work, welcome friend!

"The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

3 posted 2003-11-05 02:00 AM

Loved the poem cricket. Bravo and Welcome to pipTalk. I look forward to seeing some more like this. The title is fine...leave it. Your buddy - Kevin.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2003-11-05 03:34 AM

welcome to Passions..
how odd that I have a friend who might write this very same thing...

*sigh*

Enjoyed...just makes me wallow in my sadness more, but at least it makes me do SOMETHING.

I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-11-05 03:43 AM

Welcome to Passions!

It's good to write emotions out...sometimes it's the only way we have to get it out of our systems. Looking for more of your poems!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-11-05 03:51 AM

(big hugggssssssss) This is a very heartfelt debut, sweet friend, I send many angel comfort hugs your way as I know how hard it can be to lose a close friendship through a weak relationship and I hope the friendship stays, God Bless You, I love this! Welcome to Passions, sweet Cricket, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your gorgeous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and be sure to check your E-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cricket, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

cricket
New Member

since 2003-11-04

Posts 3

7 posted 2003-11-05 08:24 AM

wow thank you everyone for the warm welcome and kind words. I wasn't sure what to expect. Unfortunately Most of my poetry comes from hurt. I seem to have a knack for writing pain.......trying to turn that into love . Lets see where my writing leads me.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2003-11-05 12:35 PM

Cricket~
Welcome to Passions ... I'm sure you'll enjoy reading and replying to some of the other poets here and posting more of your lovely work~
We're sort of addictive !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

9 posted 2003-11-05 12:49 PM

Welcome to Passions! Thank you for sharing your talent...

Ya know what they say. Curiosity salted the snail.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2003-11-05 01:36 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Much enjoyed your entrance post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2003-11-05 01:45 PM

Welcome to Passions, Cricket. Nice to have you here. If you have any questions, don't hesitate to contact a moderator. They will be glad to show you the ropes.

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

ranidae_poet
Member

since 2003-11-05

Posts 66
Texas,USA

12 posted 2003-11-05 02:16 PM

AS you can see many can relate to this...very touching poem. I m sorry that you are going through this. But if you are like me...writing is my outlet...it's how I keep my sanity....keep writing ...its therapy for the soul.

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