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EvocativeVerse2
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0 posted 2003-11-04 02:49 PM


Lacy Blossoms

I don't know what wisteria looks like,
for alas I'm a Canadian boy.
Wild mountain asters cleaving frailly
to barren hazy highlands sound nice though.
Can you please tell me are they white or blue?
And I've gathered from the way people talk,
orchids, drunk on the ardent sub-tropic
air must be exquisite, but I wouldn't
know. Ask me about the snow blossoming
from a leaden December sky, petals
minute and perfect and crystal white like
diamonds. All creation buried beneath
their cold nurturing shroud, and I'll tell you
they're God's tears for a world laid-bare. Yea I'm
a Canadian boy. Ask me about
snow and I'll paint for you lacy blossoms.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

© Copyright 2003 Kevin R. Middleton - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-11-04 02:59 PM


Kevin, those "lacy blossoms" were beautiful,
and this is a picture of a wisteria vine
that a friend of mine has.
Hugs  
Ethel


jellybeans
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2 posted 2003-11-04 03:04 PM


very beautiful....loved the imagery of this
Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-11-04 03:26 PM



I'll take them.  
When you make this this
beautiful, they must surely carry some
warmth within.

Wonderful job, Sir.

froggy
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4 posted 2003-11-04 08:28 PM


Very beautiful Shakespeare.
I could picture the image in my mind.

:-)



froggy
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5 posted 2003-11-05 01:34 AM


Hey Kevin,
Had to read this again.
Something to dream about tonight.
I still love it.

:-)

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-11-05 04:20 AM


*big smile*
nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2003-11-05 01:19 PM


I join Dixie in a smile

M

ranidae_poet
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8 posted 2003-11-05 01:27 PM


Such a beautiful piece of work...a peaceful piece...I am new around here but I look forward to seeing more from you.
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
9 posted 2003-11-05 01:30 PM


EvocativeVerse2
"thumbsup:

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
10 posted 2003-11-05 01:32 PM


*Smiling back at you*

I'm a Canadian gal...
I LOVE snow and I'm proud of it!!

Oops..got carried away there...love your piece.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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