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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-11-04 10:30 PM


the light, is
statistics (among many)
unique in darkness.
multiplied by numbers it
becomes unnoticed

replication of irrelevance
an i-replica from we-replica,
and they are replica, too.

paralyzed by grate-us  
the feral child
labeled ‘born’
is made

rejecting the relapse
a circle has no dead-line
nor has evolution

the speed ends in dark mirror…


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-11-05 04:08 AM


I have no idea what this means but I'm gonna bump it
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In Your Poetic Mind
2 posted 2003-11-05 08:19 AM


there is so much depth here,  I think written with a little pain?  the circle contiunes, if not "broken"
Lauren~

i carry your heart with me
i am never without it
you are what a moon has always meant sky of sky
the wonder that keeps stars apart-
e.e.cummings

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2003-11-05 08:22 AM


pandonov
You place wind upon the wind. Be careful it could become a storm. LOL

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