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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-11-04 06:37 PM


Her Loveliness I Caress


She's wearing a sexy dress
with a slit up the side.

Its not the dress I desire.
I desire the woman inside.

Her fine silk blouse
caressing her breasts.

She pulls me close.
Her loveliness I caress.

She whispers,
"I want to love all of you.
Tell me where to begin.
Show me what to do."


JamesLee
November03
2003



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1 posted 2003-11-04 06:46 PM


whew! with whispers like that, you can't go wrong
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2 posted 2003-11-04 08:24 PM


Everything you write is so passionate....
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3 posted 2003-11-04 09:18 PM


JamesMichael~
My goodness ... you sure know how to melt the screen~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Suetang
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4 posted 2003-11-04 10:08 PM


Hey James

I guess you don't need to be asked twice??
Very sensual writing.....fabulous!

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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5 posted 2003-11-04 11:23 PM


But if it's the woman inside why the slit on the side?...don't have to answer, just being rhetorical, after all that could very well be her own choice

Martin aka ecrivan


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6 posted 2003-11-05 04:35 AM




(smiles) This is sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you truly always warm these pages with your sensual sentiments of love and passion! (big hugggsssssss) May you feel love's loveliness always, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Ericc
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7 posted 2003-11-06 09:52 AM


Wow...great write!

Eric

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