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Open Poetry #29

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pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-11-04 12:31 PM

cadence,
the running i
down
coiled spine
twisted in heavy thoughts.
careless for
the break,
i-stuffed
in

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2003-11-04 12:33 PM

excellent petre
was waitng for you to post..good now i can go to sleep..or attempt it

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2003-11-04 12:35 PM

I am not sure exactly what you mean here, but for me, I read it as someone hiding within themself, but not really wanting to be there....just my take on it.....

and I liked it

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

3 posted 2003-11-04 12:55 PM

thx raph, if i knew i would not have made you wait

but seriously i'm flattered

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2003-11-04 02:49 AM

Awesome, as always

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-11-04 02:59 AM

sometimes we all need a break

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