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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-11-03 11:23 PM

This is the gathering time,
of rainy day finds to
thaw those frozen nights.
Branches and leaves
abundant as pennies,
copper the ground.
November is uncertainty
on the road to
the unknown,
a solemn prayer
on the eve of the
whimsical Fall.
O but to hide away now
with the beautiful one,
drunk on the full moon,
our souls
gifted with the makings
for dreams,
as the deep slumber
approaches.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2003-11-03 11:47 PM

if only..

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-11-04 02:28 AM

yes, if only

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

3 posted 2003-11-04 02:36 AM

hei, a beauty

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2003-11-04 02:47 AM

Wonderful.

PassionandFun
Member

since 2003-07-30

Posts 60

5 posted 2003-11-05 10:42 AM

"November is uncertainty
on the road to
the unknown,"

Nice job. Typical darkness but I really like how you still keep the reader guessing on what might come next as your subconscious streams out on each subsequent line. Keep it up!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-11-05 07:54 PM

this sounds lovely, My God
Michele . . . hoping
*smile*

love this line:

copper the ground
very nice
xxoo

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-11-06 07:08 AM

O but to hide away now
with the beautiful one,
drunk on the full moon,
our souls
gifted with the makings
for dreams,
as the deep slumber
approaches.

Beautiful, Michele....just beautiful.

Hugs

Ethel

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2003-11-06 03:32 PM

lovely thoughts most elegantly delivered...

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

9 posted 2003-11-06 04:50 PM

O but to hide away now
with the beautiful one,
drunk on the full moon,
our souls
gifted with the makings
for dreams,
~~~~~~~~~~

beautiful

Do songs on the radio sing to all the fools in love?

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2003-11-06 04:53 PM

"November is uncertainty
on the road to
the unknown,
a solemn prayer
on the eve of the
whimsical Fall."

Beautiful Michele...you have such a unique way with words.
Very much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

11 posted 2003-11-06 11:09 PM

WOW! So many great lines in this I don't know where to start. Keeping this one.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2003-11-06 11:52 PM

(sigh) There is a solace filling these words, sweet friend, this is most heartfelt and vibrant, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michele, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

13 posted 2003-11-07 12:53 PM

The goddess in you was speaking through this poetic write...

EA

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