Open Poetry #29 |
Dementia Smiles |
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Dementia throbs in a powerfully enthralling intimacy Where my obsession becomes rather…well….Catholic Describing the trauma of inner experiences I’m wondering what mental hospital abandoned favoritism? Not to mention a responsive oneness, with mankind? In my adult, larger-than-life, I’m still standing? Could it be some stereotypes assume this power? Of my eyes, writing seminars while times are extreme? Who understands me better then me and knows the order? Who’s watching the stores?And what about all the gossip? Seeking out an almost godlike hour…. This despairing form of madness, maligns self of senses Where a once decisive volume becomes misdirected And the Sacred loose control…..looking back and blinking Eminent mind absorption, has a wide-ranged atlas Stuck in the trunk of a car and never used? Historical and geographical tapping rich in the veins Infamous eagerness cultures wide-eyed accord, uncontaminated Celebrated episodes, with coats around reflective moments Each and every blood cell dreaming I am a conscientious objector of grim malice… Everyone needs their own quietism…transcendence Whose to say lizards are not worthy of God and awful creatures? Which recently has taken form, speculating deep pleasures Rubbing my throat raw, where human forms act like sleazy skunks Where there’s a presence of familiar…genuineness assures Which is our very own night on stage… Dawn assures the worthy Lord and his universe We are and always will be flowers of youth…beautiful rose petals Which will move into summer’s expressed inexhaustible In a tone of regard, direction takes on a prophetic tenderness Where earth and its offerings, contain a continuance Of some wandering silent surprise Now direction alters, and we become eyes that were partially blind Well, order and justice prevail….in our minds, to our salvation My breath for the moment is life….returning as a fairer child In oneness with the even, vivid, rough, intense and dear Then, I’m dementia rising to an eternal universe One of which, I’ve discovered along the road There is no comprehension, I give up…and wander toward the beckoning And become a carnivore of marriage to the sea….and it’s sunrise, Where companionship becomes our offspring |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ, In the words of a professor you are asking why. and as the saying goes, "Ours is not to question why, Ours is but to do and die." As always enjoyed the write. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Who understands me better then me and knows the order? True, and thankful to say that only I know me well.... For everyone else might think I were a little "different" at times.... Very well written Lee....a swirl of emotions and thoughts whisking amongst the syllables and sounds... |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Very well penned. Crystal |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I like this one |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn! you make me think...too deeply sometimes |
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