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I don't, still..... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Sanity is delicate fragile as hope fades further from me that in some way I don’t still love you don’t still hold on to emotions that reduce me to begging in languages unknown to me recognized only as ache want..... and with the wisps of reality fading still further from me I softly cry out “I love you” ~SEA~ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is so poignant, Sea! Corinne |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Susan?  I know . . . *smile* xxoo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
" emotions that reduce me to begging in languages unknown to me recognized only as ache want....." Oh Susan..this piece absolutely 'aches'. Wonderful writing...much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I know Sea, exactly how this feels.....hugssss you.... Lauren~ i carry your heart with me |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ladies, thank you each very much  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
So close to home for so many, well written feelings Susan... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you Barry  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gah close to home...really close |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
that reduce me to begging in languages unknown to me ==================== speaking in moth tongues baby ... moth tongues.  always love your ache inspired writes Sea-girlie. Words break into splinters on the pages I write |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) I know of this ache ever too much in myself and others, sweet friend, that faint voice in the background says "I love you!" but in the foreground you know you must leave it behind! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
just wanted to pop in and say thank you to Dixie, Janet and Noah for reading and being so nice  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
this broke me..damn |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
emotions that reduce me to begging in languages unknown to me recognized only as ache want..... Susan, this is beautiful, even thought it is sad. Very good writing, swet lady.  Hugs Ethel |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Sorry I missed this! And glad I found it. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
God Susan I love this. The ache is so evident and I have felt just like this so much lately. Hugs you! |
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