Open Poetry #29 |
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Still Holding You |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989![]() |
Still Holding You Hearing sounds of laughter born of yesterday I smile reflect upon those moments cherished memories Days of softness like flow of silk recollections of the past... Raindrops in gentle fall reminders of time spent sharing walking in mist of eve embraces under shimmer of moon Twilight watched love growing the stars beckoning "wish upon me" whispers escaping consenting to their pleas, and we, like children oblivious to the coming storm reveled in the gaiety of our youth. Hours stolen throwing caution to the wind daring time catch us if you can.... Sudden flashes, dodging lightning bolts of realization. Time does not stand still life moves on as does love and some wishes aren't meant to come true but yet I find I'm still holding you~ I wish you joy, I wish you peace, I wish that every star you see is within your reach... and I wish you still loved me. (Jodee Messina) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-31-2003 12:30 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how beautifully sad...much needed today Miss Donna, thank you |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Dixie my muse seems to be wanting me to ramble in thoughts today....thanks hon, you are so appreciated. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Donna, seems your muse is not only into poetry but song, as well. Enjoyed this Very Much! |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
I cry for love that's gone A love that can't be mine. I pay everyday for loving him, A love deep down inside. I keep my distance, praying he will come my way. I feel your anguish. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ This is just a sentimental beauty~ Thank you ... I'm gonna do some of that thought rambling too~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssssss) Oh Donna, I send many angel hugs your way, sweet friend, I hope all is alright as you deserve true happiness forever! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Mary Ann Member
since 2003-04-23
Posts 111 |
This is touching and beautiful ![]() God bless, ~MA~ |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
![]() ![]() I am here ![]() Lauren~ Will the wind ever remember the names |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Twilight watched love growing the stars beckoning "wish upon me" Those were the best moments, weren't they? This is lovely, and it tugs so hard. Dear Donna, I'm so glad to see you posting more often. I really love reading your poetry, and the comfort that it brings. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my gosh sweetie...this just aches. Heart Hugs....much luv, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Karilea, perhaps she is part musician? Thanks lady. PJ, thanx much. I appreciate your thoughts. Marge, I bet your ramblings are just lovely... write my friend....write. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Noah dear, I am fine, just doing some poetic venting of sorts. Thanks. Lady L~ I KNOW ![]() Lori, what a wonderful compliment you bless me with! I hope that I can write something worthy of posting and I am so glad that you find comfort in my words. Hugs doll. Nancy, miss you sweet lady. Aches yes, but tis a good sort of ache. Love ya hon. It's better than I could have planned.. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Donna, it was so hard picking a favorite stanza..but this one.. "Hours stolen throwing caution to the wind daring time catch us if you can...." I know... This read like a song.. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good God Donna . . oh mann and we, like children oblivious to the coming storm reveled in the gaiety of our youth. yes indeed and is tough to let go of I know . . . ![]() xxoo |
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