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xtel
Junior Member
since 2003-11-02
Posts 16


0 posted 2003-11-03 08:16 AM


Told me that you would always be there
But now that I need you most, you’re not there
I know that I told you to slow things up
But it seems that you have decided to put an end to everything
Was it a lie when you said that you love me,
That you can do everything for me, that you will never leave me?
I know that tomorrow I’ll see you in the arms of another girl
You always do that,
Seem like you enjoy seeing me in pain.

xte|

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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-11-03 08:18 AM


good poem, but frankly, if he treats you like that, well, simply....your allowing him to.  Say good bye and start anew, with someone who appreciates you and knows the real meaning of love.  
God bless

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2003-11-03 12:22 PM


I can hear the pain of your heart.
Love, Margherita

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-11-03 12:31 PM


ouch

hang in there, find someone new

angelblueyes
Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
4 posted 2003-11-03 12:49 PM


I feel your hurt and pain. If he treats you this way though, he doesn';t deserve your love.Let him go and find someone who'll treat you the way you deserve to be treated.
Crystal

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