Open Poetry #29 |
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Looking Within |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
![]() Breezes were cool enough just a few days ago, that the setting October sun did not warm my veins, and winter seemed just on the verge of my horizon. How large it appears ~ so close, perhaps one could touch those sunspots they talk of… to reach into the soul of sun, feel its warmth again. The rains will fall, Winter will blow, snow will flurry, drifts will build ~ but I will know the warmth again. For now, I look within. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
yes, that's where to find the warmth..."within". Beautiful Karilea. M ![]() fate is not just whose cooking smells good but which way the wind blows (Ani DiFranco) [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (11-01-2003 06:17 PM).] |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
For within lies an oasis, a babbling brook over smooth stones, a warm flowing breeze that ruffles a shock of hair ever lightly.. On a roll, aren't ya? |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes....you know exactly where to find it dear lady. ![]() Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
lovely as the inner person that penned this....hugsssss Lauren~ Will the wind ever remember the names |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Mmmmmm. Very nice indeed. hugs, Chris Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Oh Karilea, this is beautiful, sweet friend, it sounds like somehow you're starting a series of perspectives, of where to look and how to see deeper! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, next time I trust you'll be looking out or looking beyond, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-02-2003 04:35 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You truly lack nothing when you find the treasures within. Beautiful. And what a lovely picture! Love, Margherita ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you will find enough warmth within you to melt a mountain's snow |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
but I will know the warmth again. For now, I look within. truly said. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea...You have much warmth...can feel it all the way into California many times. Thank you for sharing it! Hugs! |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
You have much warmth within that can be felt many miels around. ![]() Crystal |
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