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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-11-01 06:15 PM




Looking Within




Breezes were cool enough just a few days ago,
that the setting October sun
did not warm my veins, and winter
seemed just on the verge
of my horizon.

How large it appears ~
so close, perhaps one could touch
those sunspots
they talk of…

to reach into the soul of sun,
feel its warmth
again.

The rains will fall,
Winter will blow,
snow will flurry,
drifts will build ~

but I will know the warmth again.

For now, I look within.

© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 2003-11-01 06:17 PM


yes, that's where to find the warmth..."within".

Beautiful Karilea.

M  


fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (11-01-2003 06:17 PM).]

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2 posted 2003-11-01 06:17 PM


For within lies an oasis,  a babbling brook
over smooth stones,  a warm flowing breeze
that ruffles a shock of hair ever lightly..

On a roll,  aren't ya?

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3 posted 2003-11-01 06:17 PM


loved it
Enchantress
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4 posted 2003-11-01 06:25 PM


Yes....you know exactly where to find it dear lady.
Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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5 posted 2003-11-01 06:30 PM


lovely as the inner person that penned this....hugsssss

Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember the names
it has blown in the past with
its crutch its old age and its widsom
it whispers no this won't be the last

Nightshade
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just out of reach
6 posted 2003-11-01 06:37 PM


Mmmmmm. Very nice indeed. hugs, Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore



    

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7 posted 2003-11-02 04:35 PM




(smiles) Oh Karilea, this is beautiful, sweet friend, it sounds like somehow you're starting a series of perspectives, of where to look and how to see deeper! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, next time I trust you'll be looking out or looking beyond, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-02-2003 04:35 PM).]

Margherita
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8 posted 2003-11-02 05:10 PM


You truly lack nothing when you find the treasures within.
Beautiful.
And what a lovely picture!
Love, Margherita

passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-11-03 03:55 AM


you will find enough warmth within you to melt a mountain's snow
ambrish
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10 posted 2003-11-03 04:46 AM


but I will know the warmth again.

For now, I look within.
    truly said.

Martie
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11 posted 2003-11-03 12:42 PM


Karilea...You have much warmth...can feel it all the way into California many times.  Thank you for sharing it!  Hugs!
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12 posted 2003-11-03 12:44 PM


You have much warmth within that can be felt many miels around.
Crystal

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