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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-11-03 07:33 AM


The taste of Time

The taste of time a Scottish Brie
The odor of a prime to be
A bit of this a bit of that
A witch’s brew within a vat

Stirring in the wind of Braille
The course for you to set your sail
O’er an ocean foam and fright
Casting brine both day and night.

It’s where you feel a sense of core
Stemming from a sense of awe
Paying life along the way
A token bit each living day.

And as you sip this living Brie
You taste the spice of all to be
And look onto a heavens goal
To keep for you a living soul

Oh God the one I cannot see
Please let my mind converse with thee.


© Copyright 2003 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2003-11-03 07:44 AM


Good Morning Sy!  Hope it's a good Monday for ya.  
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2 posted 2003-11-03 08:11 AM


And as you sip this living Brie
You taste the spice of all to be
And look onto a heavens goal
To keep for you a living soul

Oh God the one I cannot see
Please let my mind converse with thee.


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me thinks HE reads your cadence kissed poetry each morn too ...
What better way to start the day?

Im having english muffins with raspberry jam,
shall I drop a couple more in the toaster for you and Randy *L*

*ww*


LeeJ
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3 posted 2003-11-03 08:15 AM


I believe He is talking through your very own words...in verse my friend..you are deeply blessed.
Sunshine
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4 posted 2003-11-03 08:27 AM


Must be Monday...Because Sunday thoughts are present here.  Just received a great e-mail of a story about what's on the other side of the door...we always wonder, yet if we just believe, and accept, we will find such joy.  

God's always talking to you, Sy.  I see it in your poetry.  Today, and every day, he gives you one more line to write.

I thank Him for that, and you!


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5 posted 2003-11-03 08:35 AM


"Oh God the one I cannot see
Please let my mind converse with thee."

Oh I do believe God reads your words just as I do every morning Sy!
Do you think He would enjoy a spot of tea with you and I?
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-11-03 08:41 AM


JM,
English muffins with raspberry jam, what could be better to sooth the savage Randy.
WWRS

Duncan,
Just an average morning thank you.

LeeJ,
You are a sweetheart.

Sunshine,
And you are a love. Hugs

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-11-03 08:44 AM


Nancy,
What a wonderful thought, lets have God for tea.

scorpio
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8 posted 2003-11-03 08:56 AM


Very spiritual Sy...God is a good listener.

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2003-11-03 09:00 AM


scorpio
And I guess I am not. LOL Thank you.

Susan Caldwell
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10 posted 2003-11-03 10:40 AM


Morning Sy!  

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-11-03 10:51 AM


Susan.
Morning love.

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12 posted 2003-11-03 11:20 AM


Indeed he does...Morning Sir....

Lauren~

i carry your heart with me
i am never without it
you are what a moon has always meant sky of sky
the wonder that keeps stars apart-
e.e.cummings

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2003-11-03 11:24 AM


Lauren,
Thank you dear.

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14 posted 2003-11-03 11:46 AM


When time and space cease to exist then we are free and yes ... God expresses Himself beautifully through you, dear Seymour. Go on conversing and sharing beauty.
Love and hugs. Margherita

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15 posted 2003-11-03 11:51 AM



Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2003-11-03 12:15 PM


Martie,



passing shadows
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17 posted 2003-11-03 12:33 PM


boy Seymour, I needed this today
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18 posted 2003-11-03 12:38 PM


I like the spiritual feel to this.I so needed something refreshing this morning.Thanks.
Crystal

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19 posted 2003-11-03 01:23 PM



I do believe that ye be a spark of He!

Angel hugs 'n kisses,
EA

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20 posted 2003-11-03 03:04 PM


Bravo Seymour. Very well written my friend. I enjoyed this piece a lot!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Seymour Tabin
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21 posted 2003-11-03 05:44 PM


passing,
I'm glad it was avilable. LOL

Crystal,
Glad I could oblige.

Earth Angel
I think I just got kissed.

EvocativeVerse2
Thank you for the bravo.

Earth Angel
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22 posted 2003-11-03 07:11 PM


Mr. T., you did! You did!


EA

littlewing
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23 posted 2003-11-03 07:17 PM


SY?

O’er an ocean foam and fright
Casting brine both day and night.

yes indeed . . . the powers that be
*smile*
beautiful
xxoo

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with you
24 posted 2003-11-03 07:31 PM


"It’s where you feel a sense of core
Stemming from a sense of awe
Paying life along the way
A token bit each living day."


always enjoy your words

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25 posted 2003-11-03 07:37 PM


And as you sip this living Brie
You taste the spice of all to be
And look onto a heavens goal
To keep for you a living soul

Oh God the one I cannot see
Please let my mind converse with thee.



                 

I sure do love this, Seymour, my friend.  
Ethel


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26 posted 2003-11-03 08:47 PM


Very real, this yearn to see or speak with
He who gives us all we are...  Hoping to
fuel the fires of faith...that one might
have peace eternal...

I hope for this...

Seymour Tabin
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27 posted 2003-11-03 10:05 PM


Earth Angel
Thank you sweet.

littlewing
Thanks for the beautiful.

Sea,
And I love your comments.

Seymour Tabin
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28 posted 2003-11-03 10:07 PM


Ethel
Thank you love.

Barry,
And my hopes are with you.

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