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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-11-02 09:59 PM

Autumn the imposter
sprinking
the green eyes of summer
with flames of raging fire,
toasted and dried,
how they litter the ground,
estinguished
to cinder,as the wind
drags them home

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (11-03-2003 06:39 PM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2003-11-02 10:02 PM

Wow, I doubt I could have done near as well
describing this. Very nicely said...

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

2 posted 2003-11-03 01:40 AM

He's right you've described this better than most could.

Crystal

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

3 posted 2003-11-03 02:33 AM

they're so beautiful but...
yes...
I agree.
You wrote it in an amazing way.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-11-03 03:07 AM

you always make me think

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2003-11-03 05:14 AM

I elect you Goddess of Autumn! This is powerful and poetically outstanding.
I was just watching those leaves falling this morning and I have written a little senryu too about it.

See the golden leaves
wave goodbye in the soft breeze
feel their touch of love

Love and hugs. Margherita

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2003-11-03 08:39 AM

no one personifies nature as you do mish. awesome work always

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2003-11-03 08:45 AM

this was a profound read....

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2003-11-03 08:50 AM

inkedgoddess
Excellent write.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2003-11-03 12:13 PM

Well done!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2003-11-03 12:27 PM

Extremely well done and much enjoyed!
Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

11 posted 2003-11-03 04:56 PM

thanks for taking the ride with me fellow poets, and i'll gladly take that title, marguerite, and the pretty senru too......

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

12 posted 2003-11-03 06:28 PM

Great time of the year....great read.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

13 posted 2003-11-03 07:48 PM

Oh My so true Michele
an imposter indeed
tricking us with beauty
and waking up in snow
Beautiful writing
xxoo

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