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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2003-11-02 07:29 AM

Wondering

I’ve wondered neath a shadows fall
And felt the gray of memo’s call
Whispering sad melody
An ancient song of threnody

It passes like a feathers touch
The faintness of an odors clutch
It taps upon your whimsies door
And settles like the mist on moor.

I could not shake the feel of wilt
The permeate of peels of guilt
The muster of a faint despair
That tugged my heart in taints declare.

It was an eerie tease of dwell
A web that held me in its spell
And when the sun lift shadows flow
It was the moment it let go

So when a shadow swells your fear
Seek the sun, to give you cheer.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-11-02 07:34 AM

Emerson is smiling...

quote:
The south-wind brings
Life, sunshine, and desire,
And on every mount and meadow
Breathes aromatic fire,
But over the dead he has no power,
The lost, the lost he cannot restore,
And, looking over the hills, I mourn
The darling who shall not return.

Threnody, by Ralph Waldo Emerson

Thank you, Sy...

Seymour Tabin
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Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-11-02 07:45 AM

Sunshine
Thank you dear and you are bright and chipper this morning.

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

3 posted 2003-11-02 08:52 AM

The rays of hope are warm and bright as the sun's light...well done Sy.

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2003-11-02 08:57 AM

scorpio,
And a happy Sunday to you.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-11-02 09:45 AM

A beautiful piece for a lovely Sunday morn Sy.
Much enjoyed as always.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2003-11-02 09:49 AM

I couldn't help but smile seeing that Sunshine was the first to respond... seek and ye shall find? *S*

This is beautiful, Seymour... *S*

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2003-11-02 09:56 AM

"threnody"

"a song of lamentation for the dead"

----------------
I do so love when you teach me a new word...
You fill up me mothy mind all the time with your delightful rhymes divine.

whimsies door

you make me mothy heart smile with word play like that.

youre the winkies behind the whimsies

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2003-11-02 09:58 AM

So when a shadow swells your fear
Seek the sun, to give you cheer

Wise words this rainy morn Seymour. The fireplace is aglow and biscuits with honey are ready! hugs, Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2003-11-02 10:16 AM

I enjoy learning a new word or two,  particularly
when it concerns poetry or poets....or
their works and words....

Thanx SY,  you filled my plate in more ways
than one...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2003-11-02 10:25 AM

Nancy,
Thank you sweet.

suthern
Hugs this morning.

JM,
And you are the whimsies behind the winkies.
WWRS

Chris,
Missed your biscuits with honey.
Hugs and have a good day.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2003-11-02 10:27 AM

Magnus
You are kind, thank you my friend.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

12 posted 2003-11-02 11:13 AM

Sy - you always leave me with hope
fo this, I thank you
beautiful, m'friend
xxoo

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

13 posted 2003-11-02 12:55 PM

littlewing
And you are a dear.

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

14 posted 2003-11-02 04:01 PM

(smiles) Oh Seymour, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I believe life is all about wondering and we constantly have to keep stepping into the sun, for the shadows can disillusion! (big hugggssssssss) Wonder of the fortune, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

15 posted 2003-11-02 04:42 PM

Noah,
Always enjoy your coments, thank you.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

16 posted 2003-11-02 05:24 PM

You wonder, but through the sad mist you carry your hope and you are not disappointed.
The sun is always there ...
Beautiful and touching.
Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

17 posted 2003-11-02 07:25 PM

Margherita
You are sweet, thank you my dear.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

18 posted 2003-11-03 03:50 AM

some shadows are not so bad

loved the write Seymour...an uplifting piece

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

19 posted 2003-11-03 07:35 AM

passing,
You are a lover.

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