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What If |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA 
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What if you weren’t here, What if you weren’t my teddy bear, What would I do, How would I feel, I know the love I feel is real, I hope we last, I don’t want us to be a thing of the past, I love you, And I always will, As I look into heaven, To the horizon, And over the hills of time, I hope you’ll always be mine. Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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Kensho_Cinder* Junior Member
since 2003-10-29
Posts 10In the Flow |
I really like the hope, and the honesty of this piece. Very sincere; very direct. Very nice too.  [This message has been edited by Kensho_Cinder* (11-01-2003 11:21 PM).] |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
Where there is love there is hope..the question is how long the love will last...I'd make sure that flame burns slowly © Copyright 2003 ecrivan |
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