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Hockeychick19
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0 posted 2003-11-01 10:27 PM


What if you weren’t here,
What if you weren’t my teddy bear,
What would I do,
How would I feel,
I know the love I feel is real,
I hope we last,
I don’t want us to be a thing of the past,
I love you,
And I always will,
As I look into heaven,
To the horizon,
And over the hills of time,
I hope you’ll always be mine.


Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

© Copyright 2003 Kelly Gambon - All Rights Reserved
Kensho_Cinder*
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since 2003-10-29
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1 posted 2003-11-01 11:21 PM


I really like the hope, and the honesty of this piece.  Very sincere; very direct.
Very nice too.  

[This message has been edited by Kensho_Cinder* (11-01-2003 11:21 PM).]

wordwizard
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since 2003-09-08
Posts 483
on the way to next world
2 posted 2003-11-01 11:25 PM


Where there is love there is hope..the question is how long the love will last...I'd make sure that flame burns slowly


© Copyright 2003 ecrivan


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