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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-11-01 09:46 PM



i love my clutter
so don't ask me
to put anything
"in its place"
as if it isn't there already
because its exactly where
i put it and that happens to be
exactly where it belongs
at any given moment

much like me

i am where i belong at this moment
so don't ask me to be
somewhere else

i am here now

enjoying my clutter

it and i are exactly
where we belong

© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2003-11-01 10:03 PM


"i am where i belong at this moment
so don't ask me to be
somewhere else

i am here now

enjoying my clutter

it and i are exactly
where we belong"

Had to smile at this one Kacy, since I spent a big part of the day putting my clutter back where it belongs.  


Magnus
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2 posted 2003-11-01 10:10 PM


Do I ever relate to this...fortunately,  I
don't need a ladder to step over mountains,
or other man made impediments of my own
creation....


Glad you are where you care to be,  and this
was a cute write.  Thanx....

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2003-11-01 10:51 PM


Oh this is just great Kacy!
I love my clutter too.

There is nothing like finding
just the right wall, and/or empty space.

Funny thing is, I spent today dusting.  

icebox
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4 posted 2003-11-01 11:34 PM


I think I am worse at this:
if it is mine, it isn't clutter;
it is just work in progress.

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5 posted 2003-11-01 11:50 PM


i love my clutter
so don't ask me
to put anything
"in its place"


it is sooo good to see someone else lovin clutter!!! LOL I know exactly where everything is....YEA for this... a women after my own heart...

hugsss lady


Lauren~

i carry your heart with me
i am never without it
you are whatever a moon has always
meant sky of the sky
the wonder that keeps the stars apart

Pilgrimage
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6 posted 2003-11-02 12:15 PM


Aaack! You'd drive me wild, I want everything just so. But I like your little poem, and I like you being just where you should be.  

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

bbent
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7 posted 2003-11-02 01:28 AM


Yo Kacy...Cool write,first time I've seen you abandon capitol letters.I'm always amazed at the way you seem to capture my thoughts with your writes.You make good medicine,I always feel better after reading your art.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

Midnitesun
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8 posted 2003-11-02 08:45 AM


LOL, Ray, about those capital leter? I couldn't find them in all the clutter. Thanks friend, for the kind words.

Nan, LOL, I drive myself crazy sometimes.

Lori, thanks galfriend, dust isn't clutter, its just just dust ON the clutter..LOL!

Lauren, thanks, I am not alone, yay!

Duncan, why bother? It will just show up again tomorrow. LOL


this does not mean I'm dirty, just that I like to look at all my works-in-progress, as icebox would call them

Magnus, LOL, glad you enoyed

icebox, that's a truth for me too!


wranx
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9 posted 2003-11-02 02:04 PM


I too, put things just where they want to be, it's just that the maid...
(*shamefaced*  yes, I have a maid to clean up this shack.."You live in THAT? and have a MAID?")
puts things where SHE thinks they want to be!  Sheesh!

[This message has been edited by wranx (11-02-2003 02:05 PM).]

MorninGlory
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10 posted 2003-11-02 02:13 PM


This is so clever, and so true! It may look like clutter to someone else, but we know where everything is! Don't move a thing or we will be lost! lol  Good job!

~ becky

Jason Lyle
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11 posted 2003-11-02 02:27 PM


I also need structure, way to rub in the freedom of chaos

Jason

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12 posted 2003-11-02 02:31 PM




(smiles) My philosophy is "I like my room messed up the way I like it!". (big hugggssssssss) One person's mess is another person's treasure so there will obviosuly always be conflict, but I believe life is all about finding relationships between all sorts of things and collecting! God Bless You, sweet friend, you should read my Interactive Journal in the pipTalk Lounge, I talk about this a little bit, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Martie
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13 posted 2003-11-02 03:29 PM


Kacy...I sure do understand this!  
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