Open Poetry #29 |
Halloween (with my Daddy) |
stottbear94 Junior Member
since 2003-10-10
Posts 11Living in Daddy's Eyes |
Witches and goblins and, kids trying to scare And some kids in costumes with lots of hair Gathering in masses Attacking the streets Hustling shoving And begging for treats moms and dads not having fun wishing trick or treat was done Kids snitching candy from the bags Theyll eat so much candy they will gag. The night is over Children are finally asleep Sugar rush, tummy aches, rotting teeth Parents picking through the bags And stealing their favorite treats. Happy Halloween |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! I hope you and your dad had a wonderful Halloween together, sweet friend, this is an adorable and lovely debut, yay, I love it, hope you didn't eat too much candy and got them big tummyaches, LOL! Welcome to Passions, sweet Chester, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and be sure to check your E-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chester, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-01-2003 11:45 AM).] |
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stottbear94 Junior Member
since 2003-10-10
Posts 11Living in Daddy's Eyes |
Thank you, but I have been here before. My daddy put it here. His name is Ringo. Happy Halloween |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StottBear ~ This is just delightful ... and I am so glad to see you again~ HiDaddyRingo *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Stottbear, I see you have all the joys of halloween and you write about them so well. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Noah- Thanks for the kind words, and the e-card... she got a MAJOR kick out of it. Marge- Thanks. She really thinks everyone responding is so cool. lol Kethry- Thanks for replying. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
You know what, I can tell your a wonderful little girl just like your dad is wonderful.You two make a magnificent pair.The love, the talent, and the bond you share is wonderful to see.You truly are gifted. Crystal |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a wonderful pairing... I enjoyed this very much and look forward to reading more! *S* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah this is so great!! I'm pleased to see you have joined us here with your dad! I'm going to be watching to see you post more of your work! ~Big Hugs, Nancy~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
welcome to the family...does this mean...i'm a new aunt?...and keep writing we will keep reading...helen |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Parents picking through the bags And stealing their favorite treats." laughing here....yes, I used to do that! Mine are too big for trick or treating now, so I just buy what we all like! welcome |
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