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Don't Ask Me What It Is...
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Don't Ask Me What It Is... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
There is a point of origin to all things. Even silence is preceded by the voice of something more. And one day...all that ever begins will step to the edge of its final understanding. Endings wait for everything. Yes...even silence breaks its promise to the echoes of its birth. Yet one thing stands absolved to the tides of loss and new beginnings. Don't ask me what it is. Only watch with me...as worlds rise and fall away before the comfort of our eyes. There is no need to ask. We know. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ericc~ I like this write sooooo much~ Pondering here ... thank you~ 'Even silence is preceded by the voice of something more' THAT is awesome~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Eric, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your gorgeous words do as they beam with truth! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ericc--Thought filled and thought provoking. Enjoyed! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whoa! good stuff here! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We know... only if we listen in the silence. Well done, Eric. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Even silence is preceded by the voice of something more. And one day...all that ever begins will step to the edge of its final understanding. Endings wait for everything. Eric, you words will linger in my mind today, and though I have much to accomplish, I will find time for brief moments of ponder before I close my eyes tonight. This is superb writing, offering the reader so much to extract and ponder. Patricia |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Eric? silence is golden, the true test and when you have THAT you have it all *smile* beautiful as always xxoo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, your beautiful deep reflection brings me to the edge of .... KNOWING. Your thoughts always induce to look within and find the hidden treasure. Thank you, wondrous Poet. I love you. Margherita  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
This is one of the most exquisite divine expressions you have ever written. I feel the grace of this as a gentle breath flowing sweetly through my veins and caressing the walls of my heart... and it saturates my mind and permeates my soul. What breathtaking, perfect beauty captured flawlessly as only you can. You are truly amazing, gifted, and blessed with the whispers of God Herself, and the talent and skill to weave them into a Universal language we can all feel, hear, see, and experience fully and deeply within our souls. May the sacred mark you trace upon our hearts remain there always. Thank you so very much... my every breath is a whispered prayer of gratitude for the beauty and love that is you. There is no need to ask... we live, love... know. I love you, Moca [This message has been edited by cinnamongirl (11-02-2003 07:04 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Amazing..simply, an amazing write. |
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