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Tonight the Nakd
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Tonight the Nakd |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Tonight the nightmares come alive and yet there's lesser of the fears, allowing for the screaming out and streaming down of weary tears. Tonight revolves of setting free inhibitions left in wake. A blind eye to the days to come, masks allowing all that's fake. Deciphering the fall that came that crept into a desperate mind. The hand of death that kisses me, the reaping of the grim in find. Tonight I watch the shadows walk the darkness grabbing, holding to. The spirit of this eve in hold, the laughter from the weakness due. I've hallowed in the halls too long, in nakdthoughts dressed for its ease. Tonight I stretch and breathe the air and traffic in the sounds of tease. I'll see the deadened and the true, haunted houses in between to right the rhyme and sing the tune of Fall upon the scary scene Tonight the naked is just Maureen~~~ "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (10-31-2003 11:10 AM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
and i do will disrobe, cellulite and all , to meet the spirit within, may our paths meet beneath the smiling moon |
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TeAnne New Member
since 2003-10-31
Posts 1 |
Maureen I like this, you've still got it girl  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
such a sweetheart...I can't believe our paths are crossing again...thank heavens for a yahoo request and the fact I never took you off mucho  maybe you will stay awhile and write some of your beautiful poetry for us to share... Maureen/MMoonchild once in a blue moon a long time ago that was.../ Sometimes Lady Ollyne and sometimes Alicethruglass  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hey Michele..disrobe..I? under the moon... hmmm not sure the moon could take it Have a good time tonight..at least it's supposed to warm up a bit. hugss M |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Nicely penned poem, Not sure I will dress up for the occasion, My normal is scary enough. Just as your writing is good, your normal excels No matter whose name it is written under Gloom |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I'll see the deadened and the true, haunted houses in between to right the rhyme and sing the tune of Fall upon the scary scene Tonight the naked is just Maureen~~~" Love this...especially the above. Have a happy Halloween. ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Maureen~ So many nice lines in this. You go sweet thing! I've hallowed in the halls too long, in nakdthoughts dressed for it's ease. Tonight I stretch and breathe the air and traffic in the sounds of tease. Really nice poem girl friend~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The baring of your true and nakd self, is truly a beautiful thing to behold, dear M!  Lovin' hugs, EA |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Enjoyed this Maureen, a wonderful flow and rhythm to it! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Mr.Gloom...but I think there are scarier faces and costumes running around...I shall be among them this evening. My heart needs a bit of racing lately. Nancy, hope you are feeling better... Thank you hugss M Lori, well it's not a very scary poem but it's what came to me this morning early Have a nice evening..catch you later hugss M Linda, such a sweet response, thank you. Donna, nice to see you..give April a big hug for me and here's one for you too, Thanks.  M |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JustMaureen~ I have seen the reflections of JustMaureen~ Ain't nuttin' scary 'bout ya' gal~  Have a GREAT TIME~ You deserve it !!! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maureen Hugs to the true of you! |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
"Tonight revolves of setting free inhibitions left in wake. A blind eye to the days to come, masks allowing all that's fake." You write so well, M! I really like this piece. e |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great write Maureen! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, I LOVE this... just like I love MAUREEN, too. Have a good time out there amongst all the goblins and pumpkins, my friend.  Hugs to you  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And Maureen boiled and brewed up a very good write, love the cadence... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Oh you knew I was going to read this just because of the title. Nakd! LOL! Great piece sweetie. Loved it...but then you knew I would. Sorry I haven't been able to reply as much as usual this past week. Had oral surgery and feeling woozy still. Looking forward to reading everything just as soon as my world stops spinning. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have a glowing golden heart that always glows and may your naked self forever feel filled with gardens and prisms! (sigh) You are special to us all, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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