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Autumn Tenderly
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Autumn Tenderly |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Fondled in the chilly fingers tampered plunging Fahrenheit Blushed upon the sleek decorum, arbor leaves in season bright Dalliance of sunshine sparkles in a newly found forte Even as the grays turn blue and summer slyly fades away Paid crisp the skins perpetual, in autumns grinned exception Matured in peaceful rhetoric, with ease fate’s clear direction Yet there is more to color sure, than simply finding time The dance in candid discontent adventures full in prime In succulent seclusion felt of autumns scenic spy The outward shows as inward glows remunerations high As all the land consents to be ablaze in formal don While there believes the next and sees anew day to count on Copyright Kkh 10/29/03 |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
the autumn winds herald in more than a change of leaf colour, don't they Kathleen? (alas a blanket of snow around the corner!) [This message has been edited by ecrivan (10-29-2003 11:35 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This piece has a wonderful flow to it TD and I enjoyed every line. Thank you for sharing, I loved it. |
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Mary Ann Member
since 2003-04-23
Posts 111 |
I liked this poem a lot  The rhythm and illustration is captivating....thank you for the lovely read... God bless, ~MA~ [This message has been edited by Mary Ann (10-30-2003 07:27 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous imagery...wonderful write |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely write TD !! hugs, Chris Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well done my friend, Autumn certainly fits your brush well... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Kathleen, you always paint the seasons ever so well, sweet friend, this is a tender and mesmerizing write, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ The internal rhyme scheme made this an even more delightful read~ You are so very talented and I'm glad you're a poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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