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Dogma |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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I solemnly question this path my ideals What I know to be true to me, at least . . . Sometimes, I doubt the Sun smiling upon me I do not deserve this I know this in my heart the shining but I cannot deny this innermost ache which keeps me up at night I solemnly question this existence not because I fear it or abhor "this" Moreso because I know I just do not belong here anymore |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
littlewing We would be much poorer without you.  |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
This is excellent. Inside you in the shining in the core that never sleeps there is truth and acceptance for all that you can choose all that you have done it is the part of you which knows it is time as a constant not as a linear progression it fuels the want of you the yearning to connect with the equals of itself inside the souls of others it has no age no gender no ethnicity it flows from life to life and provides the continuity that becomes you every time. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dogma's for the dogs, as far as I am personally concerned! Truly! Been there, done that! You, my Dear One are of gentle spirit, and this earthly existence can be very harsh for you at times! But you will ascend--in good time! You have much joy to spread to others to leave too soon! You are loved by many!  Love, Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sweet Sue... If you only knew...and I think perhaps you have an idea... just how much you are adored and how you inspire others. You are right where you belong.  ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
My karma ran over my dogma. paladin |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
This is absolutely amazing. into the library  And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I loved this and am saving.. I understand the thoughts.. Susan |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sue...your beauty of spirit touches me.  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
ahhhhhhh... forgot to click... |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh my, LittleOne.... you deserve every ray of Sun that shines down upon you. You, my sweet friend, are a very special and loving person.  Heart hugs, my friend  Ethel |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
It's hard to know which pain is more intense, that of knowing you're where you don't belong, or of knowing that where you belong, you can't be. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
"i just do not belong here anymore" god, sue you take my words so many times...... how often i feel lost and unfound still beautiful expression of this feeling here |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sy - you are such a sweet soul thank you Icey PLEASE post this on its own PLEASE My God you have read my mind what a reply! For this, I am grateful made me smile thank you Linda, oh you know me so well thank you Nancy, I do , I do just sometimes I don't . . . you know? Thank you what you have said is so kind paladin ahahahah I NEEDED that thank you - that got a good laugh Liz, thank you so much . . . Susan, yes, I know you do thank you Martie, oh my - God, I am speechless thank you so much Ethel, ahh made me smile , you did we all do, we all do thank you sooo much LittleOne Ahhh Ed yes yes exactly, kind of like if clarity is even worth it sometimes thank you Michele, as you take mine, you do that last write you did goodness . . . stole my breath it did I think I should belong in a lost and found box somewhere . . . thank you Thank you everyone I really really needed all of you today xxoo |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Dogma is just divergent from the true truth and beauty of life, simply just a ridicule attempting to break the faiths of many! (sad sigh) Don't try to believe in hat, dearest friend, you have far too much soul and faith to stoop to expectation and principles, God Bless You, following your heart is good karma, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"I solemnly question this path my ideals What I know to be true to me, at least . . . Sometimes, I doubt the Sun smiling upon me I do not deserve this I know this in my heart" Oh gawd...how I know this feeling... But, Sue?...you ARE beautiful...truly. Love you much, lady... When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-21-2003 02:34 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
well you know what i think of this so why swell your head..grin |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Noah - sometimes you see so much in me that I dont even see thank you for that truly Vicky of course you know this we share the same brain Love you too, sis and thank you Raph - aww man come on! Jus a little wouldnt hurt maybe a GREAT JOB WOW . . . SUPER! c'mon . . . *smiling* yes . . . I do know and thank you Thanks guys means a whole lot to me much more than you guys will know xxoo |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
fabulous,,, |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
wow. just wow. and some. keeping this....ah! you just made me think of something, thankyou x10000000000000 Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
In this, m'love, you continue to grow, as a poet, a woman and a human being... Fortunately, living by the river, I don't need a pooper-scooper for the dogma I encounter. I just let the river sweep it away. Well done, baby. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
lol at wranx. the 'dogma' And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I do not deserve this I know this in my heart the shining but I cannot deny this innermost ache which keeps me up at night You go tweets, let it fly and hold on to all that makes you happy, forever and ever. Love that pretty pen that writes you~ that you write with. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Hey little sister, it's been a while since I dropped in but life is chaotic right now! This was absolutely wonderful and I feel as though you and I breath the same air and thoughts sometimes! Another one for the library! Missed ya gal! Tima |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
wow.... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wondermous littleone wondermous. yer beautiful yanno that? good! library Maree fate is not just |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Q - always good to see you here with me Gem, very cool what have I made you think of and where is so I can see? *smile* Cead Mead xxxxxx's thank you Baby, you never NEEDED dogma . . . as for the river , well it does take care of you quite well . . . I love you so What you said to me . . . speaks volumes thank you darlin' Liz, thanks for the bump and yes . . . he is a sweet one . . . Geez Bluesy . . that was beautiful When I fly, grab hold tight of my wings k? I am not leaving you on this ground uh huh thank you tweets Tima, my sister by spirit - Get your behind in here I miss you soo much thank you . . . Thank you Meg Maree - wondermous . . ahh I adore new words . . . The PIP dictionary . . . (hey there's a thought) If I am beautiful, then you are a gift from the angels themselves Thank you so much LittleOne Thank you guys for making me smile so xxoo |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
ees caul (w)E(re)Veau(so)lution searchingyou always workin that brain luv ya, Tonto |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Without you. we'd be lost.You touch the eharts and souls of many. Crystal |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bri? does the term "madness" mean anything to you . . laughing . . . God I really needed that RIGHT now and yes . . . finding me out I be doin jus dat (Tonto . . .) Luv you much and thank you boopetalwing xxoo Crystal, goodness - as do you how very sweet thank you so much! thanks guys xxoo |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ah yes life can be hard sometimes, but with a spirit as loving as yours you will surely always be a blessing to those who know you....as we at Passions are. Very excellent writing! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Littlewing...I know your words, I do. But you do belong here with us. You give us so much... Patricia |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
and why the hell not? nice poerty tho...did you need someone from the sheriff's dept...well i am right here...and i just shined my boots...h |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you so much Gentle Spirit that was so very kind ahhhh a ray of sun . . . needed much  thank you Patricia thank you so much, I meant more of this plane, like Earth - society belief . . . thank you - you do make me feel special Helen - shine those babies up and let's do some damage . . . *smile* I meant here, as in spiritually . . . but I will take you up on that offer - I do have some people I would love to see your boot meet their @$$ *laughing now* Thank you everyone, so very much xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (09-24-2003 10:52 AM).] |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Mmm I like this littlewing. Dogma a.k.a. Belief. Yes there is something to be said about belief...and sometimes we masquerade inside ourselfs. (Laughing out loud.) Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
you are so dead go answer that post right this minute MR! lmao . . . please? thank you xxoo |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
It's as if you've opened up my soul and read my every thought. This is such a personal poem. I The one thing that I can say is that this poem is painfully truthful and real. I love it. Member, yv [This message has been edited by yv (11-19-2003 08:13 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
thank you yv so very sweet of you xxoo |
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