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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2003-10-31 03:16 AM



Letting Go


the hour is late
and I am
surrounded by
the covers of night
where I can
cry unnoticed
under these layers
for silence
is an enemy
I can not fight

"Tough times never last...tough people do." carol gardner

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-10-31 05:00 AM


wish I wasn't so far away
nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-10-31 05:57 AM


so true Helen...

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Spiros Zafiris
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3 posted 2003-10-31 07:19 AM


..1slick_lady../\..indeed, lyric and sad;

sings and sings../\..Spiros


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KristieSue
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4 posted 2003-10-31 07:57 AM


where I can
cry unnoticed
under these layers
for silence
is an enemy
I can not fight


so true...but I thank God for these moments to myself some nights...

beatiful poem

Ya know what they say.  Curiosity salted the snail.

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5 posted 2003-10-31 02:21 PM


You are so right.....a battle I've fought, and lost, and fought.....

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