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Open Poetry #29

The Greates Joy

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2003-10-30 05:06 AM

You Put Me Down In Every Way
And Apart Of ME Dies What Can I Say?
To Make You Happy And Proud,Is What I Dream Of
Every Single Night And Day
You Never Appreciate My Work
Somethings Always Wrong
Why Must You Hurt Me,
With Hate So Strong?
Why Are You Never Satisfied.......
With The Things I Do For You
Why Can't You See......
The Greates Joy In Life Would Be......
You Loving Me Too

I'd Rather Be Hated For Who I Am Then Loved For What I'm Not~!~

Much Luv,
~!~"Trina"~!~

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-10-30 04:18 PM

I feel the pain in this piece. Awesome write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

2 posted 2003-10-31 01:32 AM

It's good to get it out..keep writing..it's a good way to work through things to hard to keep inside.
Love,
Terri~

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