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Open Poetry #29

Illusion's Wine

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-10-29 09:08 PM

The sky permits a glance inside
then shuts its peephole
diverting me with circus clowns.

Born of springtime's rainsoaked lawns,
clouds form skeins of creampuffed wool
to knit the shawls on trees below.

Lovestruck on illusion's wine,
on days like these when i am torn,
I'd rather insulate my soul
than bear the sting of blantant cold..

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (10-30-2003 07:34 PM).]

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2003-10-29 11:42 PM

use your illusions..great poem..great album too..why is this one the second page?...yeah

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-10-29 11:57 PM

yea, thanks raf
poor axl,
huh?

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-10-30 12:41 PM

hey its his fault..did you see his botched facial surgery? what was he thinking?

Happy Poet
Junior Member

since 2003-10-29

Posts 10

4 posted 2003-10-30 01:32 AM

Nicely thought and penned

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-10-30 03:31 PM

Good Lord Michele YES
the walls . . the walls . . .
xxoo

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

6 posted 2003-10-30 03:54 PM

I love the title of this- 'Illusion's Wine'-and then the wonderful images you crowded into such a small poem. Well done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

7 posted 2003-10-30 07:31 PM

I like the Illusion....good job

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2003-10-31 06:54 PM

Lovestruck on illusion's wine,
on days like these when i am torn,
I'd rather insulate my soul
than bear the sting of blantant cold..

Love that verse!!!

You captured the illusion so well.
Cheers girlie!

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