Open Poetry #29 |
A Girl and The Ghost Part 3 (repost from Open Poetry #23) |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
The ghost went on, "I died in this very room To this day it still has the smell of doom I did not die I was killed by my girlfriend's Jealous ex boyfriend. She begged him not to But it was too late." The girl's eyes started filling With tears It stung so bad As she tried to hold back The tears of pain She felt for the poor ghost The ghost moved closer And said, "Don't cry over me miss. I have been haunting this room For over 50 years And your the first to move in That reminds me of my girlfriend." The girl smiled at the ghost And said, "I have never known a ghost to be So nice To people of the human world. What made you this way And why are you so kind to me Other than I look like your girlfriend Of 50 years ago?" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I am gonna keep ya'll in suspense. LOL Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
This ghost sounds familiar. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Oh! Oh! Oh! Oh! Oh! What is that ghosty goin' to do? Bon-Bon |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Suspense..... I've been waiting a day for this.... This is torture!!!!..... hurry up and write the rest, will ya? Sherry
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