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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-10-29 12:03 PM


The ghost went on,
"I died in this very room
To this day it still has the smell of doom
I did not die
I was killed by my girlfriend's
Jealous ex boyfriend.
She begged him not to
But it was too late."

The girl's eyes started filling
With tears
It stung so bad
As she tried to hold back
The tears of pain
She felt for the poor ghost

The ghost moved closer
And said,
"Don't cry over me miss.
I have been haunting this room
For over 50 years
And your the first to move in
That reminds me of my girlfriend."

The girl smiled at the ghost
And said,
"I have never known a ghost to be
So nice
To people of the human world.
What made you this way
And why are you so kind to me
Other than I look like your girlfriend
Of 50 years ago?"

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I am gonna keep ya'll in suspense. LOL

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
1 posted 2003-10-29 06:15 PM


This ghost sounds familiar.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
2 posted 2003-10-29 06:41 PM


Oh! Oh! Oh! Oh! Oh! What is that ghosty goin' to do?
Bon-Bon

vandana
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since 1999-10-22
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USA
3 posted 2003-10-29 06:42 PM


nice
Magicmystery
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since 2002-02-13
Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2003-10-29 07:03 PM


Suspense..... I've been waiting a day for this.... This is torture!!!!..... hurry up and write the rest, will ya?

Sherry


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